Love Affair

About a Love Affair. Truth Be Told.

  Its insane how i was attracted to you
The minute you walked through the door
I wonder if he saw it in us
If he could see my lingering inner w***e.

Dont tell my boyfriend about that night
The night we became aware of our feelings
For something just smacked us in the face
Our hormones just jumped to the cielings.

In that sweaty car filled with our bodys
Was where the deeds were done
I wonder if he could feel it the next day
When he sat in the seat, the seat of our fun.

How did he not see our interest
When it showed in my emotions, so bare
Why did i enjoy that night we had
Our heart savaging love affair.

Its like it happened intentionally
Like God somehow had it planned
We were at the perfect place, at the perfect time
Ready to take on our one night stand.

I wonder if he found out, what he would do
Would i have broken his heart, or left a tare
But one thing is for sure, nomatter how it is
I enjoyed our passionate love affair.

Author's Note

How do you like it? (Truth be told.)

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

The Truth To Be Told..oh that was nice
i know attraction can come like a raging fire
Its insane how i was attracted to you
The minute you walked through the door
I wonder if he saw it in us
If he could see my lingering inner w***e...i like how you tell your felings
I wonder if he found out, what he would do
Would i have broken his heart, or left a tare
But one thing is for sure, no matter how it is
I enjoyed our passionate love affair...i am sure his heart will break ,he will cry many tears
but it was a good night ..ha ha
wonderful really ..i like your style.so spontaneous,very emotional
and exciting to read..excellent,really nice

[Miss Prince]

That's so awesome! I love it. The first stanza's freaking cool. Spelling and grammar errors, but they don't detract too much from the poem. Very raw, totally cool.

[Pamela A. Lamppa]

This is steamy. You convey the heightened emotion in this piece quiete well. Those raging hormones will absolutely take over at times.

I am so partial to rhyme so this hit the mark for me.

Nice work. ~Pamela

[PerfectFlaw90]

I like how this is written in the style of a sort of inner confession. Very honest and moving, great job!

[atwagner22]

i could relate in some way. i liked it and understood it very well. great job. ~andrew

[Random]

Gj....nicely done, you have a good talent you should publish some of these ^^

[darkgurl]

I think it's written so well, I like this write, I can sure feel the passion, well written I like your talent...Kim