Oh Brother

Oh Brother

A Poem by Kaotic Barbie
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from a boy's point of view

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  Oh Brother, Oh brother. How dearly you hurt me.
You took me down your path of sorrow
And left my maturing mind blurry.

I confided in your brotherly love, oh brother.
And look at what it did to me.
Leading me down the wrong type of road
Into the land of un-forgiven druggys.

Oh Brother why bother talking to you
For your mission is already finished
Leaving me white nosed and cold handed
Breaking me to the ground, keeping me un-furlished.

They should take you away and keep you there
For you will have no more kids to hurt
You already lost the position of role model
With all your snow flaking effort.

Oh Brother, Oh brother, for i hope you open your eyes
The little brother you broke is no longer on your side.
Im Turning the tables and finding my head
And leaving the rest of my thoughts unsaid.

© 2008 Kaotic Barbie


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Amazing. I can really relate to this, in a way. Just about perfect.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Good job this is really good :) rating = 100 ^^

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Kaotic Barbie
Kaotic Barbie

Baltimore, MD



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My name is Kati. I'm 20 years old and live in Baltimore, Maryland "And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. Th.. more..

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