Who am i suppose to be?

Just a question i ask to myself everyday.

 Excuses for reality
Blindness of the heart
Dreams a distance away
Body and soul apart

Oceans take the pain away
Breaks the hurting in me
Loosens my tensity
Who am  i suppose  to  be

Broken hearts strive
and my screaming past
lives to the present
But life just goes by fast

I  scream to the angels
Who am i suppose too be
Waiting for the right answer
Could only take centurys

I hold on to this soul
Burning deep down inside
To spark back to life
And be ready for the ride

If i was baptised
Where is my dignity
I cant find it in this skin
Who am i suppose to be

Reviews

[Whitney]

This is depressing.

Sounds like something I would write.

Great job.

[Jules]

simple, I like the rythm and the rhyming...Exposes all the questions one would be asking in that situation...Well worth a read!

[Wildecat]

A deep with lots of emotion, a very good write, a pleasure to read your poetry.

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

really deep well written piece. keep up the good work love.