Clutch

A poem about seduction, love and never letting go.

I just finished him
His sweet scented seduction
Lying next to his heated limbs
Seeking further into his suction.

Blasting my lips with paradise
We play in grinding ploy
Dancing around our sweated pores
Enchantedly dazzeled with astonishing joy.

I crave his hands, his body, his soul
Take me away to your world
Bind me to your bitter sweet
Guide us to be unfurled.

I want to claim you as my own
My curious one to keep
Take me into your worthy abode
Lay me down to sleep.

Im blessed with your presence
Scarred with your endless touch
You are mine, if not forever a dream
To have and to hold, to clutch.

Author's Note

What do you all think? I would really like to know to improve my writing skills. Thank you.

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

I especially enjoyed the last verse, and the way you brought "the title" into play.
Very nicely written.
I believe all writing should be from the heart...

[Maximus. R.]

Not bad but I think the more simply you tell the story the more believable it is to the reader