My lost soul

I’m on the train, 

Riding fast while I’m getting to my stop,

The world don’t look at me and the koala in me don’t give me strength,

I’m just thinking about all the color around me that separated me from my path, 

I feel lost like the world is giving me hint and obstacles to go through them, 

But if I stop listening to the koala and start being a metal,

The train will arrive more faster as I will imagine, 

Sometimes the train make me realize how far my dreams are to come true, 

But the only key is to be strong.

Author's Note

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Reviews

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Great words:) Sounded very tranquil. Yes be strong always:)

[katiushka]

I will thank you

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Your Welcome

[Lavi]

I'm still marveling the use of koala in this... for me it was a bit distracting visualizing it with the rest of the poem but at the end of the writing I find myself strangely liking it so I give it a good rating.

[katiushka]

Thank you for the comment, I add the koala because the koala are lazy and they move slow in their life that’s why.

Once again thank you