stopping at 8

A Poem by k. brown

stopping at 8

AIDS:

a picture of a small boy

who did nothing wrong

© 2008 k. brown

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Larissa G.

Maybe it's just me, but...two lines? That's a statement. A powerful statement in this case, but a statement, with a title that doesn't quite fit with the rest of what's there.
Isn't there more to this? A story to be told with a beautiful flow and images and so on, the things that combine to make a beautiful poem?

Posted 16 Years Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on July 13, 2008
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k. brown

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Birth date: November 20, 1985 About: Mostly poesy/love stuff. Some short stories. Likes: Writers: Peter S. Beagle, John Crowley, Charles De Lint, some Niel Gaiman *Poets: Elizabeth Barrett Brown.. more..