You'll see them again....

Just something that will hopefully let you know, that if you you have lost someone you know they still care and you will see them again.

Soft, Green, Meadows,

the stars so high.

Everything magical.

He is there beside you, smiling to greet you, every step of the way.

People you forgotten once existed or people you have loved so dearly, cried for,

Are waiting ready for you.

YOU ARE NOT ALONE.

Soft, fluffy, clouds,

You are up there with them.

Everything so breath taking.

You see a golden gate, can't believe you're there.

You remember your loved ones, back down there, but just for a second,

But it's too late, it's time.

YOU KNOW YOU'LL SEE THEM AGAIN.

Death is not the end, It's only the beginning.

Author's Note

I'm not sure if there are spelling mistakes, but this is my first poem :) Thank you for reviewing.

Reviews

[Penulis Kecil]

Welcome to Writer's Cafe.

What a beautiful idea you have chosen for this poem. I particularly liked the lines, "the stars so high. / Everything magical."

(On a spelling/typing/grammatical note, you've got "Every thing so breathtaking" instead of "Everything" and "Yor remember your loved ones," instead of "You".)

[Robert]

you've done a really good job here, every thing lines up really well and you word choice is outstanding. it flowed very nicely which made reading it a pleasure.

good job

Robert