Makes Me Me

I just started writing this a little while ago and came up with it pretty quickly

I dance the dance that no one wants to see
I sing the song that no one wants to hear
I heal the broken hearts that no one wants to help
I love the ones who have never been loved
I write the stories that no one will read
And even though no one sees
I continue to do these things
For these things make me special
For these things make me, me

Reviews

[Kelly M.]

Like this. This expresses who you are. :)

[Forever and Always]

Thank you so much! Yeah, I was trying to add afew more lines but I was getting tired so decided to leave it. Thanks for the advice and complements and I see what you are saying now with the length. It does seem a little cut off short.

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Wow you can tell you were in a writing mood the rhythm and expression produced in this poem is very distinctive you have great writing ability
my only criticism is that I wish it were longer well done

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I like to good job :D