Flowers

The flowers are flowing,
The wind is blowing.
The beautiful radiant flowers flourish in my soul.
With a powerful marvel my heart can't control.


Yellow, red, violet or Blue,
I love the flowers, and my friends love them too.
My heart is filled with beautiful glee,
For every flower I will ever see.

Reviews

[klawrites]

So lovely! I've been reading/writing such serious and dark pieces all day. Reading this was like a breath of fresh air!

"The beautiful radiant flowers flourish in my soul.
With a powerful marvel my heart can't control."

Beautiful lines- keep writing and you'll go to great places!

[Amy Rose]

Thanks for your wonderful comment! I love writing, I really do, but I'd also love to be a music artist, If that doesn't work out for me, writing is definitely my second choice.

[Bella]

This poem is so nice. I really love this poem, I wish I would've thought of something like that. Great job, I really like it.

[Amy Rose]

I bet you could do the same, think of beautiful words other people would like.

[Woody]

this is sweet, Amy :) keep writing. you're going to be a great poetess one day, I'm sure.

[Amy Rose]

Your comment was definitely my favorite, thank you so much! I couldn't feel better. Now that i'm growing up and getting more responsible, I like to be responsible with words, if you get what I mean. I love writing, I have seen your writing too, keep it up!

[Woody]

the pleasure is all mine Amy. truly and honestly I believe you are on the right path. you have the soul of a poet. GO, GIRL, GO!!

[Amy Rose]

Thank you so much! You cannot believe how happy and inspired I am right now! You have a soul of a poet too. Don't ever give up:)