Come close and I'll whisper what she's thinking.

I'm on my wayyy to a new song.

I'm looking for sunny days,

a few good friends and forget me nots.

I'm wrapped around a light in the sky,

and dangling from the clouds.

All I'm seeing are liscense plates,

walking through this parade.

The nights aren't so good when your color's blue,

and closest friends live miles away.

I'm looking for sunny days and feilds to paint,

it's ten past three and I'm on my way.

I'm searching for someone who knows my name,

and all I'm seeing are people's faces smiling back at me.

I'm looking for sunny days we can laugh away,

gosh those killer beats and that poetry.

I'll ask nicely if you'd play two chords and say hello,

I swear I'd call it lovely and sing along.

I'm thinking of those pictures,

that hang on my wall, there's a world out there sir,

don't kid me not, it has my name all over it.

I'm looking for sunny days when I said,

gosh damn kid I love the words you say.

Old photographs and my mothers map,

those patched up blankets and kisses on my forehead.

Let's climb that tree and play in it's leaves.

I'm looking for sunny days and all I know is your name spelled as friend.

You say lock all the doors, turn on the world,

and see our reflection rain down.

I like living life by your side,

painting the years we go by.

I'm looking for sunny days, a light named Christ,

old records we'd dance by and a friendly sight.

Paris, my own backyard and simple questions.

There's only thirty-three ways to make me smile,

lets rip up the book and write a new song on our faces.

Reviews

[Last Minute Lani]

my favorite line is
"i'm looking for sunny days when i said
gosh damn kid i love the words you say."

pretty much i just like this one alot.

[RougeAngel]

well now that it looks like you're done i can leave a comment lol. i really like this poem! i guess i have a couple different ideas of what it means...but isn't that the point of poetry? lol.

You say lock all the doors, turn on the world,
and see our reflection rain down.

i really like that line. anyway, well done! its very good. man i really need to write something new lol. i like it!