Let This Fade

  

 

  

                                      They can see we seperated.Let this fade.

                                      Our love is now crushed.Let this fade.

                                      We cannot breathe.Let this fade.

                                      Letting go trust.Let this fade.

                                      True feelings.Let this fade.

 Loving me.Let this fade.

                                      Im gone.Let this fade.

                                      Sorry.Let this fade.

 Bye.Let this fade.

                                      L O V E!

Author's Note

This poem is wrote to tell you a quick summary of what its like to heal from breaking someones heart.

Reviews

[Michael]

Nicely done. I really like the regressive nature of it. Although it is not on point, I have a similar one called Circular Logic. Check it out some time.

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I find the style very interesting. Thank you for sharing

[Travis Lawrence]

Great visual presentation here, and I like this, it reminds me of meditation, when we realize these thoughts but to feel at peace we must let them fade into a breath. Not bad at all!

[Nicole Hellene]

you know what, I like this. Of course it's classic emo teenage poetry but it's classic emo teenage poetry done right. Keep the chaotic unorthodoxed style in your writing and you'll avoid being cliche and tread the fine line with tradition. Nice.

[Jimmy.]

I don't know much about poetry bud. But I likee. You gonna post any more tn?