Treetop Existence

This is a song I wrote in late 2011. When it's in its original melodic form it's quite upbeat so please bear that in mind when reading :)

what a lonely existence

sitting here with me

put your arms around me

i want to hear you breath

come sit with me in the treetops

come and take my hand

we'll make a world around us

and no one else will care

name the game your playing

i'm not taking part

put your arms around me

i want to feel your heart

come sit with me in the treetops

lets run and hide

when I look around us

your the only sight

lets sit forever

lets not look back

your the one in my life

and that is that

Reviews

[Danielle Renee]

Good read and it brings up memories. There are a several spelling errors. I like it.