Talk to me

Talk to me

A Poem by Katie A. Davis

A day spent away from home

I wonder if you’re leaving

 

A day spent away from the phone

I wonder if you think of me

 

A day spent without you in my life

Is a day spent empty

 

A day spent realizing this

Is a day I ask, "What’s wrong with me?!"

 

Why do I think of you so often?

Why do I miss you this much?

 

How can you read my moods so easily?

Why can’t you see me?

 

Why can’t we talk about this?

What are you afraid of?

© 2008 Katie A. Davis


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your use of questions is very clever. I like how you rhyme with out rhyming, and how everything flows so fluently... (im not sure that last sentence made much sense, sorry). very nicely thought out. i can see myself in this piece, you can capture the hearts of many in this poem.. nice job.

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Katie A. Davis
Katie A. Davis

Clovis, NM



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Hi, my name is Katie. I'm 17 years old, have been writing for a long time though you won't find my old works on here. I'm starting over with my writing, taking a new turn in life, and living it to it.. more..

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