Oh my. This is really beautiful! First, the format you chose and the different colors added to the beauty of this poem. Second, the flow was magnificent. It captivated me from start till the end. Third, this is soooo sweet. It's making me giddy. Haha. And fourth, I love how you ended it. I can't say more but AMAZING! This is definitely going to my library! Loved it. :)
Oh my. This is really beautiful! First, the format you chose and the different colors added to the beauty of this poem. Second, the flow was magnificent. It captivated me from start till the end. Third, this is soooo sweet. It's making me giddy. Haha. And fourth, I love how you ended it. I can't say more but AMAZING! This is definitely going to my library! Loved it. :)
I liked this. To me, it sounds as one person will do anyhing for another because what the other did for them. I loved how you used colors to help play with the story, and it made it more interesting.