You wish

About a boy and the wishes he has after he hurt a girl he lied to.

  You wish,  

  You could go back in time,  

  And change every bad thing you did,  

  Including what you did to me.  

 

  You wish,  

  You didn't lie to me.  

  You wish,  

  You didn't make me cry.  

 

  But you lied to me.  

  You made me cry.  

 

  We sat together,  

  We talked together,  

  And you told me,  

  Everything we did together,  

  Was just a game,  

  A game between your friends.  

 

  I can't believe yet,  

  That everything you said to me,  

  Were lies.  

  I was just a toy in you and your friend's game.  

 

  Then you said,  

  You really do love me,  

  And that it was the truth.  

 

   But really,  

  I don't know anymore.  

  Are you telling me the truth,  

  That you really love me?  

 

  Or is everything a game,  

  A game filled with lies?  

 

  This love between us,  

  Is just falling apart.  

  But is it even real love?  

  I really have no clue.  

 

   Do you think I can believe,  

  Whatever you say to me now,  

  After all those lies?  

 

  You wish,  

  You could change everything,  

  Everything in the past.  

  So we could be happy together.  

 

  But I don't know

  If I can trust you anymore.  

  You wish,  

  I could trust you,  

  That everything was going to be okay...  

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Thea]

Hi, Kathrina... :)))
This is actually a really good poem...It is filled with such strong emotions...
When someone we know so much betrayed us by telling lies, it is really hard to fix the broken pieces again which is trust...
I like this piece...You've written it so well...Though at some parts, I get confused, I think, you still did fine here...
I don't understand why "someone" rated you a low rating here... >,<
You did so much effort on this so...
Here's a 100 for yah...
Keep writing... :)))

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing. I like your whole wording. Keep it up!
Do you read mine to Anguish and She!

[PokemonFan#1]

A beautiful, emotionl poem. Keep it up!

[Robert Haigh]

When someone is caught out lying, it puts everything they say in doubt. We then find it hard to know whether they are really telling the truth or not. This is particularly difficult if they say they love you...so hard to know. A thought-provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.

[paparapapa]

Oh my. Wow. You captured the feeling wonderfully! I really really liked it. The flow was brilliant, and although the message was just simple and direct, I still find the poem beautiful. Nice work you have here. Great job! ;)

[The Unknown Rose]

this is really emotional but at the same time it has no emotion at all it confuses my heart and my mind but i must say this is a beautiful piece of work good job

[Chris]

Hindsight and relationships... We ask for the ultimate truth over and over and over and yet when they really do care and give it - speak it...mean it - well, ya do what you feel you need to do; even if it means finding another that will lie and lie and lie all over again until its their turn to care enough to risk truth.

[Alewis]

this was so sad there arent words to describe this emotion....

[AngelBeat]

I don't know what to say...Literally...I can't think right now...
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[Chantelle]

There's a lot of hurt and feeling in this poem. I do agree with Kaine in that this does read like it could be 'I wish' as opposed to 'You wish' but regardless, it's well written and conveys betrayal, hurt, anguish and I think even anger through these words.