You Don't Care

About a girl that was tricked by a guy she loves. She now does not trust love.

You don't care,

 

About me.

But then,

 

Why did you tell me,

 

That you did?

 

 

I don't,

 

Understand you anymore.

 

You broke,

My heart to pieces.

You let me down.

 

You made me,

 

Cry in pain.

 

You left me,

 

Alone in the dark.

 

You lied,

 

Right to my face.

 

But I don't know how,

 

I could still believe you,

 

That you care about me.

 

I guess,

 

Love blinded me.

 

You don't care,

 

About my problems.

 

You don't care,

 

If you broke me,

 

In pieces.

 

Love is pain.

 

Love is a liar.

 

And you were that love.

 

Now I know,

 

 Not to trust love,

 

Because it'll leave you,

 

In pieces.

 

You ran away from me,

 

After you destroyed me.

 

You don't care,

 

If I cry for you.

 

You don't care,

 

If I would die for you.

 

You don't care,

 

If you were the one,

 

To open my eyes,

 

That love is not to be trusted...

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Reviews

[Thea]

Aw...That really hurts a lot...I really hate those guys who treat girls like they're insensitive enough not to feel the torment in their hearts...There's such a powerful emotion on this poem that flows smoothly each and every line...Excellent work...
100/100
:)))

[paparapapa]

This is beautiful. And the format absolutely added to the poem's appeal. One can definitely feel the hurt through your words. Simple but it hits you right through the core. These are my favorite lines:
"love is pain
Love is a liar
And you were that love"
Great job kathrina! ;)

[Draven]

Tis is full of such strong emotion. Nice. Dont lose sight of love though. Itll only hurt you more if you do. I can relate to this though.

[Sugar and Spice]

I like this one too!! So much emotion and the short, clipped sentences provoke feeling kinda like a feeling of sharpness... Amazing, keep it up!!