End my suffering

About a person and the pain the person carries.

End my suffering,                                                                                                                            

Please.

Anyone or anything,                                                                                                                    

Rip out my heart.

 

Take away my mask.                                                                                               

Just take away,

 

Everything from me.                                                                                

 End my suffering,

 

Because I don't think,                                                           

I can take it any longer.

 

This time,                                                                                     

The pain won't,

 

Stop overflowing.                                                               

What can I do,

 

To make it stop??                                                           

Why can't,

 

The pain just disappear,                    

And never come back?

 

Why does my pain,                                 

Have to hide,

 

And come back anytime?

 

End my suffering,

 

Because I've been in the dark,

 

For a long time,

 

And I'm tired of trying to get out.

 

End my suffering,

 

Before I fall apart.

 

End my suffering,

 

Before I become insane...

 

Why is the world,

 

So unfair to me??

 

Why can't I stop the pain?

End my suffering,

 

Or I might end it myself.

 

Now I know,

 

There's no way out of pain,

 

And you can't hide it forever.

 

I can't stop my tears.

 

I can't stop my pain...

 

End my suffering,

 

Because now,

 

All I see is blood,

 

Running down my wrists,

 

Hoping that I can take away,

 

Everything I have inside of me...

 

Author's Note

Anything you want to say.

Reviews

[SkinlessFrank]

Well, I suppose I feel the way you describe quite often. Over the years I've become a bit numb to it, and I have my "tricks" for dealing with this darkness. Some of us were meant to be more alone than others. That you can write and express how you feel is a gift that more gregarious people don't always have.

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

Interesting, but it only touches the topic of pain superficially. What I mean is, it doesn't go in depth about what type of pain, it's quite general, which might be what you were going for in the first place. A bit predictable at the end, but a very good emo poem ^_^

[The Unknown Rose]

Interesting my friend

[AngelBeat]

I really like this. It reminded me of how I felt when I found out that this boy I liked/loved hated me. And was being all mean to me 'cause he knew. But yeah, overall, I love it ♥