Your right Kathrina! -sniffles- I should stand up! -unbuckles seatbelt and stands up in car- Mom: What the heck are you doing sit down!! Me: But this poem inspired me!
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Trust me, many can relate to this and some really do need to stand up. ( Not physically lol) I love the rainbowy colors and it flows quite well. Nothing like an inspirational poem to get you started standing up in a car ! XD Anyway, you are right, best to do things now than to do it later, when you might not even have the chance right? Nice poem. -shelves in library- Me: MOM DRIVE ME TO THE LIBRARY! IMMA PUT THIS ON MY SHELF!
Mom: SINCE WHEN DID YOU OWN A SHELF IN THE LIBRARY!
Me: SINCE NOW!
( And that's the story of how I stuck this poem in my library XD)
aww. this piece enlightened my spirit..! this poem of yours speaks of truth about life. though challenges arise everyday in our lives, we have to learn not to give up. we must overcome those hardships and stand up whenever life brings us down.. that we must strive hard to achieve our goals in life. very inspirational.. and the different colors remind me that life is too beautiful to be wasted on those problems.. thanks for sharing this amazing write!
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OH MY GOD!!!!!! I LOVE THIS SOOOOOO MUCH!!!!! *squeals with excitement then explodes*
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k I'm back togther again by all the king's horses and all the king's men but they couldn't put humpty dumpty back togther again sadly. anyway finally hours just wanted to say you made me soooo much better :)
Definitely!! We need to stand up when pushed down, we need to continue chasing our dreams and goals, despite hardships along the way, despite discouragement and belittlement too...We need to focus on the end results and forget the current difficulty level because success is never easy- it takes time, perseverance and proper planning...
I like the tone you took when implying this, it empowered me as a reader to too join in the chant of "STAND BACK UP AGAIN"...and i connected really well with the progression of the plot. The emphasis of getting back up really did this piece justice and for that i truly commend you Kathrina!
Such an inspiring poem...Sometimes, it just happens that trials come in our lives as we try to achieve something...Yes, we might fall but we will never hit the ground...Great work, Kathrina!
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Your right Kathrina! -sniffles- I should stand up! -unbuckles seatbelt and stands up in car- Mom: What the heck are you doing sit down!! Me: But this poem inspired me!
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Trust me, many can relate to this and some really do need to stand up. ( Not physically lol) I love the rainbowy colors and it flows quite well. Nothing like an inspirational poem to get you started standing up in a car ! XD Anyway, you are right, best to do things now than to do it later, when you might not even have the chance right? Nice poem. -shelves in library- Me: MOM DRIVE ME TO THE LIBRARY! IMMA PUT THIS ON MY SHELF!
Mom: SINCE WHEN DID YOU OWN A SHELF IN THE LIBRARY!
Me: SINCE NOW!
( And that's the story of how I stuck this poem in my library XD)