She Doesn't Know

About a girl and things that she doesn't know.

She doesn't know,

   Where her heart is.

       She doesn't know,

          Who to trust,

             Who to love,

                And how to live.

                   Her life,

                      Shattered in pieces.

                         Her arm,

                           That was white and clear,

                              Is now red, filled with scars.

                                Those days of smiling,

                                   Laughing,

                                     And being happy,

                                        She doesn't know,

                                           Those days won't happen again.

                                              She doesn't know,

                                                 What to do.

                                                    She doesn't know,

                                                        How to stop being in pain.

                                                           This girl's eyes,

                                                              Won't stop crying.

                                                                  Her mouth,

                                                 Won't stop screaming.

                                                                Her brain,

                                                          Won't stop thinking of suicide.

                                                     She doesn't know,

                                                That someone will save her,

                                          And love her.

                                      But, when that time comes,

                                 Can she love back?

                             Can she trust someone again?

                         Can her life go back to happiness?

                     She doesn't know,

                  How she'll survive now.

              But maybe,

         Maybe someone will reach out a hand,

     And won't leave her alone anymore,

Because, she hates being alone...

Author's Note

Say what you think :)

Reviews

[CrimsonBlaze]

Yay! More colors! I like how you show how one girl can be so emotional over one thing, how hurt their feelings can be when someone breaks their heart or if they experience problems that scar them for life. People need to know that these things happen to others and need to help them through these things. :) Greaat poem XD

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i love how you worte the poem my face was like 0.0 i was completely hypnotized with the colors as well but enough about the rainbow the poem itself was beautiful and so sad reminded my of me except for the love part i've nevr fallen in love :P excellent job!

[PokemonFan#1]

It seemed almost dark then going to light and lets just say it felt like it went back and forth between the two sides.
It is an amazing and beautiful light and dark poem. I really enjoyed it. Keep it up!

[tk]

awww... can really relate to this.. :( i've felt this before! helplessness, confusion and pain. it's all here.. :) the format and colors are really great, it added the brilliance in this poem. the girl's thoughts are well-expressed and though the situation is common, you did a good job on making this unique.. a very noteworthy write.. :)
♥♥♥

[Team_Jaward_Gale]

love it

[Thea]

Aw...There's a lot of creativity in this poem...A find this one unique...I love how you described things beautifully here especially the girl though there's such sadness...You did a great work here!
100/100
:)))

[Draven]

This is pretty good. I think it needs a little more to it though. But this is a good start. I think it has a lot of potential to be Aa great piece. Nice job.

[AngelBeat]

I like how you used the colours and zig-zag like thing...
"Maybe someone will reach out a hand,
won't leave her alone anymore,
Because, she hates being alone..."

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Heyyy, welcome to Writer'sCafe. :-)

The poem...cool; I like it. Emotional. Not exactly the most original concept, but I think you wrote it quite nicely. And creative use of spacing and font color.

Keep it up!