Can't walk away

Being insane...

My footsteps echo,

Through the empty white hallway.

Everything is eerily sterile.

 

As I walk I'm in a trance.

I have no recollection of what happened.

 

My body feels so cold,

I feel like I've lost my soul.

 

I look out a window and all I see,

Is darkness.

Darkness in coming towards me.

I feel like a bird in a cage.

 

There's no way to run. 

No where to hide.

I'm lost.

 

I continue to walk in this seemingly,

Never ending hallway.

I start to remember what has happened to me.

 

The pain became too much to handle.

I went out of control.

 

My steps sound louder,

And my ears start to hurt.

 

Tears surface on my eyes,

Wanting to come out.

I hold them back.

 

Now I remember.

I've been left behind.

Left in a place,

Where I truly belong.

 

I look down at my outfit.

All I see I'm wearing is a white hospital gown,

And a wrist band containing my name,

And other information I don't understand.

 

More tears surface,

And I finally let them all out.

 

My mouth opens up and starts to scream.

Scream with every single emotion I hate the most.

Pain, Anger, Sadness...

 

I now know where I am.

And I know...

I can never walk away,

From this place.

 

I'm trapped for good.

Trapped in my own insanity...

Author's Note

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Reviews

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*reads description* Being insane....okay me every tuesday night let's read :D

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Everything is eerily sterile.
ME: *points lightsaber out in every direction*

I have no recollection of what happened.
ME: I KNOW RIGHT!!!!...ugh! The things sugar do to you -.-

I feel like I've lost my soul.
ME: I know! That's why I hate leaving the shower -_- It's like walking into a friggin blizzard!

Tears surface on my eyes,
ME: *wipes tears* It's just...I- I- Don't know *cries some more* When you cut, it just burns!..............................................Stupid onions! I hate chopping them!

All I see I'm wearing is a white hospital gown,
And a wrist band containing my name
ME: *looks at outfit* *looks at hallway* WORK!!!!! *walks dramatically and stupidly down hallway* I AM! America's next top model!!!

Okay no but seriously, this was a good poem :) I really liked it! :D I know I joked a lot but that's just my stupid commentary. But for a serious matter it was a sad and gave off the trapping feeling. EXCELLENT POEM!!!!

[kathrina]

hahaha thanks for the review, it's very...interesting :D

[Draven]

Beautifully written.