Am I getting it down all around

Am I getting it down all around

A Poem by Kathy Van Kurin
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Looking for meaning all around, up and down, in and out...........

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·        Diamonds or coal

 

·        Am I getting it down all around?

·        Am I getting it right?

·        Whispers of meaning abound

·        Pressing my soul diamonds or coal?

·        Moments speak phrases blooming

·        Light sharpen sight.

New Awareness coming to completion

 Fresh as a newborn foal?

Transitory meaning hardly seen.

Am I getting it straight?

Destination seen but missing the boat

getting caught in the shoal.

Jesus Messiah the gift of eternal Salvation-

True life, true light.

© 2023 Kathy Van Kurin


Author's Note

Kathy Van Kurin
Honestly I do not know how the power point left the dots. sorry about that.

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these words read like a little literary miracle Kathy and are a testimony to your faith .. and those dots that PowerPoint left behind are a star formation smiling down upon them .. no need to be sorry .. smile big, go well and write on .. Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

Neville,
From dots to stars you are pretty creative! I like it. The review you gave was just .. read more
Neville

1 Year Ago


you just made an old fella very happy .. & you are most welcome Kathy indeed it was a real p.. read more



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these words read like a little literary miracle Kathy and are a testimony to your faith .. and those dots that PowerPoint left behind are a star formation smiling down upon them .. no need to be sorry .. smile big, go well and write on .. Neville

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kathy Van Kurin

1 Year Ago

Neville,
From dots to stars you are pretty creative! I like it. The review you gave was just .. read more
Neville

1 Year Ago


you just made an old fella very happy .. & you are most welcome Kathy indeed it was a real p.. read more

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Everything in and about me has become materiel to ponder, analyze and find meaning and beauty. This life journey is all about revealing lessons many times hidden until dug up and planted then finding .. more..

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