It is for certain you've woken my sleeping heart and soul with this gorgeously blessed composition of colorfully dancing imagery, blended with imaginative metaphor and syntactical flow, the likes few possess inner-passion and wherewithal enough to gift such vibrant breath a'flow across the page ⁓ to lift and fill our amazed eyes and imaginations with such a vibrant portrait to Autumn's enchanting glory.
A perfect title and photo grace us, too, by virtue of your immaculate tastes in the nuances of irresistibly spellbound ambiance; then, spotted here and there, subtle rhymes tease and please the most discerning reader's palate:
"September sighs of warm soft winds still tame, still calm,
wandering through oak tree canopy calliopes.
Thimbles of Sprinkles have begun falling through green lace leaves,
not yet crimson."
And, there's more magic within EVERY line … whose poetic voice speaks like this? No one I know of, but You … I became increasingly enamored while perusing every word and line, Kathy … stellar!💫
Thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully for sharing You with Us … hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍁
I so taken with this one, I'm going to message a few ideas your way, and if you detest them, just kick me to the curb.🤨
150/100
Posted 3 Years Ago
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3 Years Ago
Richard you are a great help. Everyone needs some positive and sunny light shone on them. Thankyou f.. read moreRichard you are a great help. Everyone needs some positive and sunny light shone on them. Thankyou for being like that. I hardly think I am anything special but still to find commonality or appreciation surly goes miles with me. Again you are a blessing to many and of course me. Hardly know what to say but hope you find good and grace in your life.
Kathy
3 Years Ago
Thank you, Kathy,
Ever-so humbly and gratefully for your blissfully gracious words of.. read moreThank you, Kathy,
Ever-so humbly and gratefully for your blissfully gracious words of gratitude and appreciation.
"traced by autumn fingers soon to hold touches of sunrise to sunset memories.
Crescents of wind enter my space."
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Dear Sami,
I wish you lots of insiration and discipline as you write and create. It's nice to.. read moreDear Sami,
I wish you lots of insiration and discipline as you write and create. It's nice to receive your wonderful reviews.
Kathy
4 Years Ago
My pleasure. You are welcome dear writer and friend.
Time goes by and to find anything beautiful, anything different is what is so neat about this Autumn.. read moreTime goes by and to find anything beautiful, anything different is what is so neat about this Autumn season. Thankyou for reading and commenting.
Kathy
Beautiful imagery and detail to your poem. It sings to the reader with such a poetic voice with the wind over waves emotion. tyfs
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Thanks very much Cyprian Van Dyke,
I hope this early Autumn time finds you busy with things w.. read moreThanks very much Cyprian Van Dyke,
I hope this early Autumn time finds you busy with things which satisfy your heart. Many people love Autumn. Thank you for reading and commenting! So nice of you.
Kathy
lovely images of fall,some birds move on to warmer weather where more come to bask in the winter snow
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Ron,
Birds do really live a life of continual change moving from place to place. Your pointin.. read moreRon,
Birds do really live a life of continual change moving from place to place. Your pointing to the idea of birds basking in winter snow. That is so cool. If they are built for it, yea I believe it. Love hearing from you.
Kathy
"Canopy Calliopes"
love that...and love the way you have the two words under the long lines...
like a couple leaves falling as autumn comes early.
we have that nip in the air this morning...started yesterday...autumn is rearing its head now...
this is how we know...
and just a slight turning of the trees...ever so slight.
beautiful write.
j.
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Jacob erin-cilberto,
I wonder is the smoke and fires and resulting fire storm winds has throw.. read moreJacob erin-cilberto,
I wonder is the smoke and fires and resulting fire storm winds has thrown a resulting change into the Sigh of September? Just a little change in the air, the natural flora-fauna. I am so thankful that the beautiful skies full of clouds are visible. Yet I also see this year progressing into a strange and dramatic one for we here in the west and globally as well. I sure do like hearing from you. I wish you bits of wonder and joy all coalesced through your life.
Blessings,
Kathy
Everything in and about me has become materiel to ponder, analyze and find meaning and beauty. This life journey is all about revealing lessons many times hidden until dug up and planted then finding .. more..