The Season Whispers

Autumn is like a special time of rejoicing in the subtle.

The Season Whispers

Evergreens Herald

 Twilight rays relinquished.

Tawny crowned monarchs

 Stand majestic.

Enthroned Kings

Glow gold silken wash.

Scepter gives its signal

Autumn strolls away.

Maple leaves release

, dance to the ground.

They rustle to November

 

‘We await you.’

She will arrive

 Whispering to December.

Bare tree beauties,

 Cloaked in winter.

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Author's Note

How does Autumn make you feel and why?

Reviews

[barleygirl]

"Rejoicing in the subtle" . . . that's beautiful! We don't get a major show of autumn in California, so I tend to be more tuned in to the way the air feels . . . usually very dry, but when it becomes damp, you know it's autumn. Dampness in the air (even when it's perfectly sunny) piques the aromas that come from the chaparrel, especially a dry flower that wafts like maple syrup scent, filling my nostrils the first time I open the door every morning. See how your subtlety sparked me? I love "autumn strolls away" . . . & the way your poem depicts the passage of time from fall to winter (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Margiel,
Today I shared with my husband your description of a dry place which is transformed by Autumn's bit of dampness. It is so picturesque the idea of a dry flower that wafts like maple syrup scent, filling my nostrils when you open the door first time in morning..Yes life is a process..the passage of time from fall to winter. It means a great deal that you put the thought into a response. Your thoughtfulness is very special. I wish you precious moments of peace and sparkles of special occasion in the daily moments.
Kathy

[barleygirl]

I'm touched & honored! *smile*

[Coyote Poetry]

I love the days of Fall dear Kathy. Cooler days, Halloween for the grandchildren and the days seem to be slower. I like the four seasons. Allow us to see nature be born and to die. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Coyote,
I think we human beings thrive on change. Just the seasonal process teach us something. Life, death, growth, life. It is all important and recognizable to our souls. I bet your grand kids love it too! Very cool to hear from you as always!
Stay safe and bless you and your family.
Kathy

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Kathy and you are welcome. Have some fun and be safe my friend.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

This is just amazing and breathtaking, wow. I really want this on like... my wall, or something lol. Autumn always makes me excited, but I don't know if I've ever heard fall captured so beautifully and accurately as I have in this poem. Your imagery is what makes this, and your words.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Colacat,
It is interesting how many people are moved within the process, the cycling of the earth's four seasons. Many really enjoy Autumn into winter. We people need change, we need to see life move on.
Thank you for your thoughtful review!
Bless you,
Kathy

[Vertigo Cat1111]

That is so very true! And it was my pleasure to read it!

[John the Baptist]

The imagery alone makes this one worth reading. Almost every line conjures up a word picture in the mind. Beyond that, we have a remembrance of the natural seasonal cycles, which come and go very much without our bidding. Unspoken is the connection to our lives, the phases of which also come and go naturally. An altogether pleasant and profound piece.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

John,
Cycles and seasons are what give us something to look forward to, you think? I look forward to any change although it may always be apparent till the actual time. I found your review a reminder to just relax and be in the moment.
Thanks for that!
Bless you,
Kathy

[Pete]

summer's crescendo. a burst of brilliance before bedding down for winter. i find beauty in all seasons and fall a favorite. wonderfully said ... :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Pete,
We fellow travelers of this life find joy in many ways. The seasons leave many delights just waiting for our finding. Change and transition, from the former to the new is always good for us all. I am with you....Autumn is so intricate and complex and full of wonder.
Kathy

[Stella Armour]

I love autumn best of all, i amk sure the trees are different but the colours are the same in your country as in mine.
There is a comfortable softness about autumn, neither too vital nor too harsh ... a alovely time for reflection before the long sleep of winter

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Stella Amour,
Autumn does lend us an opportunity for reflection as you say. Solitude too is a worthy companion in these times of beauty. Thanks for your own take on Autumn. I enjoyed your poem so much as well. Whether here in the US or some other local we can enjoy all the blessings!
Kathy

[R.E. Ray]

Kathy, it’s refreshing to read such a regal portrayal of autumn. You describe not an end of life but a subtle retreat, hibernation perhaps, that says to all.. nature is just resting its colors. This is a welcome whisper and good poetry. Love the paired photo, too.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

R.E. Ray,
It's nice to come upon your review this morning. I hope you are enjoying some sweet Autumn whispers of the winter approaching. Thankyou for your wonderful thoughts. Its really nice.
Kathy

[R.E. Ray]

You’re welcome, Kathy.

[alanwgraham]

Lovely poem Kathy. Autumn is a special and beautiful time. I suppose for us it makes us think of the annual cycle of life. Then on a deeper level We can take it as a metaphor for the passage of our own lives.
You have a gift for expressing the positive in everything.
All the best.
Alan

[Kathy Van Kurin]

alangraham,
Yes it is definitly transitional and is the inspiration and the point of pondering in so many ways. I think we identify with it's laying down of life and it's promise for something better.
Bless you much.
Kathy

[An owl on the moon]

This is a glorious vision of autumn's absolute joy. I do so love the season... the colors... leaves like spring flowers... the scent is mesmerizing... the chill air soothes the sun-burned summer soul. I appreciate you guiding us across every leaf... every passing life.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Owl on the moon,
I do so love your above words of description. Autumn is full of inspiration. You are right on. 'The chill air soothes the sun-burned summer soul. ' Great phrase!
Bless you and thanks for reading. I hope you have a lovely thanksgiving.
Kathy

[Christoph]

I think a disproportionate number of writers will be great big fans of autumn.

It's sort of our time. The world gets a bit more quiet, nature makes some of her most drastic changes, the air hangs heavy and thick and asks you to remember old feelings.

Winter will be a time for family, and feeling connected to a world of people more like yourself than you would normally stop to realize. But autumn is damned lonely.

Better write about it.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Christoph,
Thank you for reading this poem of mine. I get what your feeling here. It can also be a time of thinking and pondering. I hope that you can find some beauty and some moments of peace in this season... Bless you much
Kathy

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I absolutely love autumn. All the bright colors and wonderful smells. I say it shows the beaututiful side of death. A magical little poem you have written.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Yes, it is wonderful how inspirational this season of transition really is. As you say, 'all the bright colors and wonderful smell.' We people need change, we thrive on new experience. Bless you and thanks for your take on our beautiful Autumn.
Kathy