the seasons do pass ... perfect time for this poem Kathy! for those who notice .. days are shortening and hints of fall is on the wind here and there ... makes me feel exuberant ... such a peace flows over me in your closing ... i think i will sign out for the day to keep that with me for a while ;) thanks for sharing ..smooth read .. honest musings .. love the wind the leaves and the cycles ... strong positive closnig
E.
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6 Years Ago
Einstein Noodle,
The calendar gives us Sept. 20 being the end of summer-beginning of Fall but.. read moreEinstein Noodle,
The calendar gives us Sept. 20 being the end of summer-beginning of Fall but some recognize this turning point as the end of August. Hmmm...guess it depends on where one is from or personal choice. Anyhow, yes the daylight hours are slowly decreasing and I have seen a few leaves here and there falling and changing color. It is a faint change hardly there but I hear the slight tune starting to play. Fall is coming! Love your beautiful word clusters and thoughts.
Blessings and thanks for coming by. As always.
Kathy
Andrew Mitchell,
I know you are a kind soul for your words reveal it. I also know my writing.. read moreAndrew Mitchell,
I know you are a kind soul for your words reveal it. I also know my writing is of a simpler form from many. It is so lovely to receive the motivation which comes from fellow writers like yourself. To support and help is a great work for all of us. Thanks again sir!
Blessings,
Kathy
6 Years Ago
Simple is good, I like simple and I do simple as well:):) It is very nicely written. I am humbled if.. read moreSimple is good, I like simple and I do simple as well:):) It is very nicely written. I am humbled if I am regarded as such. nice compliment but I'm not sure I deserve such generous appraisals!:)
So profoundly beautiful and moving... season to season flowing into eternity. Autumn brings such glory in every color, letting go just before winter's sleep comes to lull us all into gray. Ah, I remember the stellar jays each summer when we camped in Yosemite... what wild blue bursts of light.
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6 Years Ago
An Owl on the moon,
It is a gracious thing to be allowed to experience the incredible thrill .. read moreAn Owl on the moon,
It is a gracious thing to be allowed to experience the incredible thrill of our natural world. It is also so sweet to read and be able to partake in someone else's thoughts of this natural world. I appreciate your review so very much. Thank you.
and blessings to you this Sunday night.
Kathy
great reflection on life through nature. i like how you tie it all together at the end with the almighty.
indeed he dwells with us and speaks to us through all of his constantly changing creation - just as he intended. beautiful, soulful words and imagery. i love it ... :)
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6 Years Ago
Pete,
I wonder that as you say, nature is always changing just as we are. It is actually rath.. read morePete,
I wonder that as you say, nature is always changing just as we are. It is actually rather wonderful to me. It is also nice to recieve a bit of input like yours and thank you! I hope you find inspiration in unexpected ways right where you are. Blessings. kathy
Yes, we cannot control everything, but the changing seasons are quite lovely really. I like your metaphor of the leaves being teardrops, falling down, as history moves on. This is a lovely atmospheric poem. And, though all the blowing winds, and passing days bring on the Fall, it is wonderful to feel that 'God holds me close through impermanent days'. Nice write.
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6 Years Ago
Great Aunt Astri,
Oh we need inspiration, peace and strength. Fall gives us so much of these .. read moreGreat Aunt Astri,
Oh we need inspiration, peace and strength. Fall gives us so much of these things. Your wonderful above review is a true blessing and so warms this heart! It's so nice to see and take in your thoughts which truly encourage. I appreciate your gift of finding good and giving it in words to others.
Bless you.
Kathy
Beautiful autumn poetry Kathy with rich imagery of leaves and creatures. May God always hold you close.
Chris
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6 Years Ago
Christine Anne Shaw,
Well, bless you today! Yes autumn is surly a special time with so much t.. read moreChristine Anne Shaw,
Well, bless you today! Yes autumn is surly a special time with so much to inspire. Movement and change in this season is moving and inspiring.
Thanks for reading and sharing.
Kathy
This is a lovely written poem. Written in such a beautiful language. I enjoyed the imagery and word display. It was all wonderfully explained and expressed! Tyfs!!!
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6 Years Ago
Dani,
I appreciate your reading, thinking and then sharing your gracious thoughts. I suppose .. read moreDani,
I appreciate your reading, thinking and then sharing your gracious thoughts. I suppose descriptions is how we process our feelings about life through, 'imagery and word display'.
Blessings,
Kathy
Here, you have not only captured Autumn in all its grace and golden glory, you have also demonstrated the constant process of change that occurs within and around us.... yes, life is indeed precious and we must savour every moment of it...... thank you Kathy... Neville
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6 Years Ago
Neville,
To read the opinions and feelings of others is so good to see! It is encouraging and.. read moreNeville,
To read the opinions and feelings of others is so good to see! It is encouraging and helps in this life. Thank you for that. Your phrase, 'constant process of change that occurs within and around us' is surly the constant of our days.It keeps us on our toes...ha, ha.
Blessings,
Kathy
Firstly, let me tell you the title of this poem is gorgeous. Your works as always have a redeeming quality, filled with good faith and light. This poem has the same optimism albeit fleetinglt sentient of the other side of the spectrum as well.
Kathy, it has been a while since I read your poems, but now that I have, I must say I have missed you.
Cheers!
M.
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6 Years Ago
Malika Relives,
I hope this early fall fins you happy and finding good around about. So nice .. read moreMalika Relives,
I hope this early fall fins you happy and finding good around about. So nice to read your above so nice review! "Good faith and light; that is a lovely place to dwell. Thanks much for that phrase and your other affirming and positive input.
Blessings,
Kathy
History does pass as the seasons pass. I like your poem c:
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6 Years Ago
Jung,
Our life's days are like chapters of each individual person's own story. I like that. T.. read moreJung,
Our life's days are like chapters of each individual person's own story. I like that. Thanks for reading Jung.
Bless you.
Kathy
That is a beautiful poem on fall Kathy at the same time reminding the reader as to how precious and fleeting life is and that every minute of every day should be cherished .
Good morning
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6 Years Ago
Gee,
Well, it is 6:40 here and still the beginning of the week. I blinked twice and the weeke.. read moreGee,
Well, it is 6:40 here and still the beginning of the week. I blinked twice and the weekend had passed to today. Goodness time really does fly. It is nice to hear from you. I love the comments and thought of others from so many different places. It is actually really wonderful. Nice way to start the day.
Blessings,
Kathy
Everything in and about me has become materiel to ponder, analyze and find meaning and beauty. This life journey is all about revealing lessons many times hidden until dug up and planted then finding .. more..