I agree with tabby, you're gifted. I love escpecially nature and environment poetry.
I also love the Maple trees. I have silver maples, one sugar maple, three or four Japanese maples (don't you just love how they look like reefer?) and I love this poem.
Please keep up the great work.
-wes
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Wesley,
Thanks for reviewing 'Maple Girl.'
I think there are many gifts in all of our.. read moreWesley,
Thanks for reviewing 'Maple Girl.'
I think there are many gifts in all of our lives, that is if we recongnize them as such. To be thankful is the biggest gift I think. I appreciate your mention of natural beauty within your own life...gifts. Trees are something which are so lovely to me. They sure do put on a show come autumn. I hope you are enjoying this time of year too.
Blessings,
Kathy
6 Years Ago
Heck yeah they do, especially the burgundy Japanese Maple. and the silver maple predicts the rain be.. read moreHeck yeah they do, especially the burgundy Japanese Maple. and the silver maple predicts the rain better than weather men
I agree with tabby, you're gifted. I love escpecially nature and environment poetry.
I also love the Maple trees. I have silver maples, one sugar maple, three or four Japanese maples (don't you just love how they look like reefer?) and I love this poem.
Please keep up the great work.
-wes
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Wesley,
Thanks for reviewing 'Maple Girl.'
I think there are many gifts in all of our.. read moreWesley,
Thanks for reviewing 'Maple Girl.'
I think there are many gifts in all of our lives, that is if we recongnize them as such. To be thankful is the biggest gift I think. I appreciate your mention of natural beauty within your own life...gifts. Trees are something which are so lovely to me. They sure do put on a show come autumn. I hope you are enjoying this time of year too.
Blessings,
Kathy
6 Years Ago
Heck yeah they do, especially the burgundy Japanese Maple. and the silver maple predicts the rain be.. read moreHeck yeah they do, especially the burgundy Japanese Maple. and the silver maple predicts the rain better than weather men
A poem beautifully worded with soothing vibes and calming imagery. The expressions were amazing and I was able to feel and imagine.
You have a talent with moving a reader with your words
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
Pia,
I so enjoyed hearing from you and knowing you took time to read 'Maple Girl.' Here we ar.. read morePia,
I so enjoyed hearing from you and knowing you took time to read 'Maple Girl.' Here we are on the cusp of another Autumn. I'm ready; how about you? It's nice to know that you enjoyed this poem's feeling. Many joys of this new season be yours.
Kathy
Such a beautifully written poem with vivid imagery throughout. I enjoyed reading this. Well done!
Paul
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Paul,
Bless you for commenting in such a kind and edifying way. I love to hear from people an.. read morePaul,
Bless you for commenting in such a kind and edifying way. I love to hear from people and know what they think. I see this was a while back. Looking through my stuff and getting caught up!
Kathy
You have a talent with words. This piece is so tantalizing! It's slow and comforting. The beautiful pictures you 'paint' with your words!
I love fall anyway but this made me long for it.
I also love how you personified the tree as if it's your friend! Your admiration for nature really shines through here! I really enjoyed this piece it reminds me of a place I once called home! Awesome!!
Tabby
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Tabby Mac,
It is wonderful to hear from you! We all are given varied and interesting experi.. read moreTabby Mac,
It is wonderful to hear from you! We all are given varied and interesting experiences which we draw from in our lives. I know you have given much of who and what you are and love in your words of writing.Thank you very much for being someone which encourages and brings your personal facet of shining reality to this life in your review......... I love words that sustain and help.........Thanks again and many blessings...................Kathy
I love the transition of the season and how you use the descriptive view of the maple girl. This is a smart poem. Love it.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
CAPOLAVOARO,
This poem was actually a joy to write. I have a maple tree in my back yard and .. read moreCAPOLAVOARO,
This poem was actually a joy to write. I have a maple tree in my back yard and it is just gorgeous! the grass and yard just get carpeted with every size, desihn and shape of fall hued leaves. It is also a big tree and yea I really dig it (but I won't ) Ha ha. Kathy thanks for your input Blessing, Kathy
Beautifully described changing season with such lovely emotions intertwined in a soft and delicious poem that celebrates nature.
Did you mean 'too wet, too cold! ?
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
John Alexander Mcfadyen,
Thannks bunches! I hope that beauty inspires. I like your helpful no.. read moreJohn Alexander Mcfadyen,
Thannks bunches! I hope that beauty inspires. I like your helpful note at the bottom of your review. I do appreciate your helpful input. I think it is fixed......................Blessings sir...........Kathy
This is a very eloquent and hauntingly beautiful piece of poetry.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Rock n roll cowboy,
It means a lot dosn't it to receive kind words such as yours. Thanks for .. read moreRock n roll cowboy,
It means a lot dosn't it to receive kind words such as yours. Thanks for gracing me with yours! Bless your heart!!....Hauntingly beautiful; we all need more of that huh? .....................Kath
Fall must be so beautiful where you live...The picture painted of Nature is timeless and exquisite and speaks to me as much of the external changes as the inner transitions taking place within us with each passing year of life. Thank you for sharing Kathy.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
DIVYA,
Yes, I agree with you. Our inner beings are like signal towers receiving beauty and me.. read moreDIVYA,
Yes, I agree with you. Our inner beings are like signal towers receiving beauty and meaning from our surroundings. thank you for sharing your input and feelings of this facet of life; for we can learn and share strength with one another! Bless you in your life.............kathy
7 Years Ago
Thank you for such a spiritually empowering message, dear Kathy.
So many images emerge from your imaginative pen, Kathy. The changing colours, the falling foliage, the chill of the dew. But expressed in terms that have so much colour, that the brightness of spring seems much closer.
I admire and envy your poetically descriptive skill. Norman
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Norman,
Right back atcha' I admire and envy your poetically descriptive skill Norman!! Bless .. read moreNorman,
Right back atcha' I admire and envy your poetically descriptive skill Norman!! Bless you as always for honest, kind helpful input; it does so much to uplift one person, (me) living on this planet. Just a little place right here where we can all gather to join forces and make just a little place of sunshine. Thanks again .........................Kathy
such beautiful imagery. flows beautifully. many great lines. "the deep jewel tones within bough's remaining deep stained leaves say
"contain you precious thoughts and dream." love the analogy and title. it doesn't get much better than this. thank you for sharing. outstanding!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Pete,
It is so nice to receive positive and helpful input! I think that being able to dream i.. read morePete,
It is so nice to receive positive and helpful input! I think that being able to dream is so important to the life of hope within our souls! You are so good to give your honest appreciative words. Please know I appreciate it so very much! Bless you for coming by and reading...............Kathy
Everything in and about me has become materiel to ponder, analyze and find meaning and beauty. This life journey is all about revealing lessons many times hidden until dug up and planted then finding .. more..