Crimson Sky

To the depths of ebbing sunset-sky horizon; 

vivid coral and gold echo

within a rainbow's wash across heaven's expanse.

I pull away in thought,just for a moment

Pondering,until my attention is again pulled back 

to the above spacious grace of God's glorious art-piece.

These eyes behold joy's beauty once again.

Heaven's panorama; Glow upon glow,

 almost a pulse matches my heart.

This soul longs to fly into Heaven's blazing glory

 just for a while, amidst rainbow layers falling upward!

Precious is the gift of ready sky being held at no cost;

simply to accept, to will, to wait;

Till again come glimpses of God's presence 

in the thrill of the next sunset!

Reviews

[Tabby Mac]

This is a beautiful write Kathy!! I love the images you brought into my mind! I enjoyed the beauty with you as I read! I'm a sucker for sunsets and sunrises so I love this piece for so many reasons! I love the last line!
'Till again come glimpses of God's presence in the thrill of the next sunset'
Tabby

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Tabby Mac,
It is just so nice to have you give confirming and positive input. We all need a little of that don't you think? Well you have a gift for being kind and believe me it does not go unnoticed. Yes I agree with you about sunrises and sunsets. They're never the same! Isn't that just so very cool? Thanks again for liking something and even writing a little of it. It sure is nice. bless you much! Kathy

[Tabby Mac]

Kathy,
You are too kind! Thank you for your thoughtfulness and encouragement! I'm an encourager I just can't help it! The world can be so negative. We are to lift each other up through life so we can all hopefully finish it in peace. I enjoy your work and your heart shines though every piece! Nature heals the soul. It's where God can speak to us!
And you bring the beauty and awe of it to all of us! I'm so very grateful for you!
Tabby

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Thanks again Tabby. I hope that you are doing well and having your possibilities realized. Bless you much.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

In every word, the beauty- the breathtaking magnificence- of the evening sky has been captured. The peculiar, unmatched character of this time of the day, pervading the whole piece, is utterly captivating. The routinely sunsets and sunrises tell us something about life- it goes on. One moment, we may be the happiest creatures on the planet and the next we moment we may become the most forlorn structure of flesh, blood and bone in the world. Excellent wording. Keep writing.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Vatsal Rohilla,
Love your review! Sunsets as everything in nature changes from day to day- even year to year- minute to minute. Inspiration is everywhere! Thanks so much for coming by. Blessings in your craft and life Kathy

[Paul Bell]

Great poem. Can't wait for the next sunset, so dark here in the mornings now.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Paul Bell,
It is almost noon here now and our maple tree is shedding it's leaves at a continuous rate. So lovely! I hope you have some beautiful mornings soon; I know that as the days diminish in length any sunshine is so welcom. Blessings to you Kathy

[MYRETOUN]

A religious differential to God
Somewhat flamboyant but enjoyable
I like it very much

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Myretoun,
Yes God's ways are seen in creation; the master artist has left his thumbprint on all things- clues for our finding. Thanks for reading! Hope you have all joy and fulfillment in your writing craft. Blessings Kathy

[Robert Haigh]

A poetically descriptive write. Greatly enjoyed.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Robert Haigh,
I see so much creativity to be inspired in all of the outdoors! Thank you for reading my poem. Kathy

[Ted Kniffen]

Well done, Kathy. There is nothing that matches a sunset or sunrise for glorious colours is there? You've written a brilliant piece illustrating that sunset with words. A good write.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Ted Kniffen,
You have a gift of encouragement, it so nice to recieve positive re-enforcement from a fellow writer. I am kind of a baby at this I guess....................Blessings Kathy

[Ted Kniffen]

This is a good spot to share and hopefully learn. For a 'baby', you do remarkably well.

[Einstein Noodle]

they sure can be pretty!! :) i appreciate the glory you give to God .. well deserved no doubt ;)
E.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Einstein,
Yes! Sunsets are glorious and always different even from minute to minute. God is the architect after all!

[Valentine]

Boy this reminds me of my sister and I would are always pointing out the amazing works of art God makes in natural settings every day. They are everywhere if one looks. Valentine

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Valentine,
Your sister must be very special to you! Having her is truly a blessing I know! I have a sister like that too. Yes God's art work really is second to none! Thanks for reading and for your nice review. Blessings, Kathy

[Sami Khalil]

A glorious moment of His glorious creations which are majestic and so lovely to behold. An immersion in His greatness away from the self and it's ego. An excellent write...:::))))

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Sami,
Hope you are well and having a good day. "Immersion in His greatness away from the self and it's ego" Now that really speaks volumes of truth. You are so right. We need God's art for our very souls! Thank you Blessings Kathy

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly. ....::::))))

[D Connolly]

I love how you've described my favorite time of the day. Just to sit and behold all of the beauty in nature, so freely given to us mortals. "I pull away in thought for just a moment, pondering, till my attention is again pulled back" is great because these scenes inspire our whimsy and almost force us to dream. But to sit in the moment and just WATCH; that is where the magic happens. And it certainly inspires you to create your own beauty in your art. I love your poems.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

D.Connolly,
You are a little ray of sunshine, did you know? Encouragement is such a gift and you have it in spades! Yes, God's ways are astounding is we can just stop long enough to be spoken to in natures ways.............Blessings to you today Kathy

[Woody]

a fabulous painting of one of God's marvels. sunrises and sunsets are certainly something to behold and, with this one, you've managed to summon a glorious picture in my mind.
good one, Kathy.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Woody,
We all try with where we are to share what we see and feel. I think that there is a limitless bank of material within nature to inspire this heart of mine...............It just never gets old! Thank you for reading and lending your input. Kathy