Crimson Sky

To the depths of ebbing sunset-sky horizon; 

vivid coral and gold echo

within a rainbow's wash across heaven's expanse.

I pull away in thought,just for a moment

Pondering,until my attention is again pulled back 

to the above spacious grace of God's glorious art-piece.

These eyes behold joy's beauty once again.

Heaven's panorama; Glow upon glow,

 almost a pulse matches my heart.

This soul longs to fly into Heaven's blazing glory

 just for a while, amidst rainbow layers falling upward!

Precious is the gift of ready sky being held at no cost;

simply to accept, to will, to wait;

Till again come glimpses of God's presence 

in the thrill of the next sunset!

Reviews

[Tabby Mac]

This is a beautiful write Kathy!! I love the images you brought into my mind! I enjoyed the beauty with you as I read! I'm a sucker for sunsets and sunrises so I love this piece for so many reasons! I love the last line!
'Till again come glimpses of God's presence in the thrill of the next sunset'
Tabby

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Tabby Mac,
It is just so nice to have you give confirming and positive input. We all need a little of that don't you think? Well you have a gift for being kind and believe me it does not go unnoticed. Yes I agree with you about sunrises and sunsets. They're never the same! Isn't that just so very cool? Thanks again for liking something and even writing a little of it. It sure is nice. bless you much! Kathy

[Tabby Mac]

Kathy,
You are too kind! Thank you for your thoughtfulness and encouragement! I'm an encourager I just can't help it! The world can be so negative. We are to lift each other up through life so we can all hopefully finish it in peace. I enjoy your work and your heart shines though every piece! Nature heals the soul. It's where God can speak to us!
And you bring the beauty and awe of it to all of us! I'm so very grateful for you!
Tabby

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Thanks again Tabby. I hope that you are doing well and having your possibilities realized. Bless you much.

[James]

Wow, There is an uncommon peace and beauty in your writing. A joy to read.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

James A.
I know I need peace and beauty; we all do I guess. Funny how our souls are like an empty vacuum at times and just the right gift or gifts will bring life just weh needed the most.. Your comment is right on to me..........Bless you sir...........Kathy

[emmajoy]

'.. .. back ~ to the above spacious grace of God's glorious art-piece. '

Life can so easily run away with us these days, clock watching, finger stroking/tapping technology, busy roads, filling each day as if it were a week long. And all the time, second after second we can miss what you have so beautifully written about, both visual and spiritual.

Life itself is a panorama presented Mankind to be seen, impressed but calmed by.. and, most of all, to find glory in. Your belief, your respect, your empathy with land and man.. is a gift rarely shared so beautifully.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Emmajoy,
Is it by chance that we are somehow fit to be at peace when left within a quiet place of nature's beauty or drawn by the exhale of fresh spring breezes curling around us? Unlimited gems of beauty wait at any moment of each of our heart's lifespan my touch us when nothing else can. I believe that we are simply imprinted with this need from our creator as He shows us His love and pulls our hearts to Him in wonder and a desire to draw close and all of this by His Holy Spirit which fits perfectly in each heart. Jesus has given me salvation and I cannot count how many times I have been strengthened in the silence of my soul by My Lord Jesus who died for me and everyone else on this earth. Kathy

[emmajoy]

Kathy, if we're not fit to be at peace, then why are we permitted to feel part of it each dawn, each waking? Surely we need peace as we do conscience, hope, love.. .. To feel even a crumb of any and more means that it's there to be valued, challenged and accepted, wholesale. Of course the need for peace is a need from the word go.. after that first cry, we're taken to our mother's breast and comforted... that is peace, safety, warmth.. love.. Sigh.. and bliss.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Love it! You just nailed this thing about us all so well. I love to hear from you. It's like looking through a window and seeing something beautiful..............Blessings to you Emmajoy!

[Neville]

This kind of moved me more than just a little bit. I notice beauty all around yet rarely do I stop and give credit to the 'great architect of the universe' as do you my dear literary friend. Maybe I need to give this more consideration.....AGT's N

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Neville Pettitt,
I think you do notice and are in awe. Sometimes a time of quiet set apart to simply read or pray and nothing else and simply look around as you are perusing words. The flow then comes: You are a poet after all and much better than I. So bless you in your own life and journey.................Kathy PS thanks so much for your time and helpful input......It helps my heart so much...........................kathy

[Neville]

Pleasure, N

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A very sensuous poem....

Lovely description and vocabulary; taking the reader deep into the scenery that you survey.

An eloquently written piece, infused with hope and wonder for the simple beauty of the setting sun.
Nice work.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

doodley,
You encouraged me with a great review! Then at the end where you wrote the "simple beauty of setting sun" something just clicked. I think bringing out the simple and showing it's intricacies is what was exciting within my own mind. Bless ya! Kathy

[Cassie]

This is such a warm inspiring poem Kathy, I see you pondering in thought and being pulled back again by the magnificence of his presence, by his glory, this is such a peaceful place to be at. To see Gods glory in things around us and by that only finding peace is supernatural and a miracle. This is to say that peace is everywhere, we just need to find it and connect ourselves to the source of peace. I like the tranquility that shines through this poem, it has encouraged me. Thank you for sharing

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Cassie,
God's presence is in His Holy Spirit and by Him we have access to His voice and help. He is All-Mighty God after all. Oh wonder and Joy! Let us always listen to one another. I think it is pleasing to the Lord to see us encourage one another. He Loves us after al. I wouldn't be surprised if You have pleased the Lord in being a blessing.l..............Bless you dear ............................Kathy

[Bacchus]

ah- there is poetry
and there is poetry
that explains life- anew!
ahhhhh!

so refreshing.
how do I write hope...
i seem to grasp the dark
and bitter so much...
but there is promise
and new life to focus on!
Thank you!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Bacchus,
Oh your review is so fun! A poem about your feelings and I guess that makes sense coming from a writer. Your poem is beautiful and special. (totally unexpected) Bless you much Kathy

[marilyn 1225]

lovely poem I can see the sunset.. ariz has gorgeous sunrises and sunsets of amazing hues not sure where you live but it is breathtaking to see the artistry by God and nature of a stunning sky great job

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Marilyn,
I live in the US in Oregon- Pacific Northwest. This poem was inspired one summer night. My husband and I were having dinner a little late and the sky just took my breath away. It was hard to focus on food when the sky was so great! I appreciate you and your nice comment. Bless you this year................Kathy

[Tony Jordan]

I love a sunset. I love a sunrise too but in the UK we are very often 'with cloud' prohibiting real fireworks or colours like those you describe here so very well.
This poem can be my substitute on those gray cloudy days.
I love this Kathy.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Tony Jordon,
Iv'e not been to England but according to movies, media and such it does seem (like you say) with cloud prohibiting) effect. I can only imagine how amazing your sunsets are when you are given the gift! You have given me quite a happy moment to think my little poem gave you something good. What a gift was your review. Thank you so much......... I wish you every blessing in the coming year! Kathy

[shade]

now that is how most people like to read poems, with detail, i like it keep writing

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Thanks. Creation is chock full of opportunities for inspiration! Kathy