Autumn Court

Heavy mist presence, extend your scepter:

Horn of power-Autumn!

I see you holding court; calling attention your realm.

Flashing banners wave! Gilded leaf confetti lists through the air.

Blood fire pulled from very earth, strength of our days!

Simply command us.We are your loyal subjects.

Brilliance majestic entrances our eyes. We bow.

Your fire burns within us. Oh we need your brilliance!

Warrior strength-pure, coalesce within us.

To live in courage, fear conquered? Oh opportunity!

Slowly she enters in procession wearing deep multi-colored robes.

Every minute passing, splendor emits beauty's fragrance.

Purest amber, royal purple, orange passion: Oh Majesty!

She has visited us but even now  she is fading.

"Too soon, the time; must you leave us?

Fading, fading......one last dance.

She welcomes the prince of winter into her arms

 together they continue in dance.

Rush of tempest, the royal ones rise,twirling the whirlwind

We gaze after them in joy.

For the life we possess exists within dormancy's rest. 

Short our lives so precious.

Within season's truth.

Author's Note

I did a little more editing.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

well said ..most appreciate the attitude toward not only Autumn but all the seasons .... each with its' own brand of poser and majesty .. i must confess ...fall is the best in my heart ;) enjoyable read and walk through the woodland Courts with you :)
E.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Einstein Noodle,
It means much to this soul that another such as yourself has appreciated this little bit of Autumn whimsy. Fun was this experience. I would notice the colors growing and laid out in splendor and it was like a picture, a tale laid out and I just wrote it out. It was really special to me. I am thankful for people who come and read my earlier stuff. Thank you!
Bless you so much.
Kathy

[Maria12]

A very good anaology and beautifully crafted.I keep telling myself we need winter metaphorically but we never want it.So it is imposed on us

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Maria12,
Oh you are clever. I just try to show the experience. I don't know how others write but that is about the best for me.........................metaphorical winter. I'll have to look that up. Thankyou for commenting. blessings as always Kathy

[Maria12]

Thanks,Kathy.I mean we feel winter in our souls but it may be needed.... when things are hidden.read moreThanks,Kathy.I mean we feel winter in our souls but it may be needed.... when things are hidden.

[D Connolly]

I love how you've done this! Your wording is beautiful and melodic. I'm struggling to get the words right and express how much I like this poem. I keep writing sentences and then erasing them; they just don't articulate what I want to say here... I feel like a humble subject fumbling and stuttering before my Autumn queen

[Kathy Van Kurin]

D. Connolly,
Your very nice to give kind honesty the way you do. What a cute response. Stutturing before my Autumn Queen..............I am sure she would simply twirl away as she is a dream after all....Your creative mind is impressive if you don't mind my saying. Blessings to you as always . Kathy

[An owl on the moon]

How you capture the splendor and beauty of autumn, that begins in the ripe heat of summer's echo, leaves catching fire, then all fading into mist. Yes, so like the cycle of life in one season, abundance flowing into that place of whispered death. Powerful, wondrous words.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

c froman,
Thank you ever so! This one was fun and this is such an amazing time.......inspiring. Blessings Kathy

[Tom]

Stunning imagery and personification as the resplendent autumn Queen relinquishes her thrown to the winter Prince elect, though as sure as night follows day, this is only a transient abdication!

A superb nature themed poem, expressive and so enthusing !

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Tom,
I appreciate the right to the point descriptions in your review. I know it is inspiring when others give their opinions. It does help so much............Blessings to you and your own creative efforts. Kathy

[Tom]

Great write Kathy ( did I say so ) lol

[KWP]

Not an Autumn passes without me gasping numerous times at the colors gifted to me all around. Satnd back, take it all in, and if you can't do that, make a run through the leaves. And it is a dance isn't it ... each season, teases and dances with the other on either side. A lovely ode to Autumn.

PS - your poem reminded me of a poem I wrote a long time ago - check it out and tell me what you think :)

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/KWPisME/1306573/

wow - it's actually really old - :D XX

[KWP]

I was listening to an audiobook that said 'Go on a scavenger hunt for ten things you have never noticed before' ... your poem reminds me of this .... it's the little things .... when we notcie the little things ... ahh.... there is hope yet x

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Your a dear and I do appreciate the time and caring given as you live and interact!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Death to life; together they still dance.
Short our lives so precious.

Extremely true. Life is precious and beautiful. Seasons like Autumn makes its often Awesome!
Nice poem friend :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Skyfall27,
Thanks for reading and giving your comment. It is nice to live in a world of transition. Nature helps us to bend and grow. Blessings, Kathy

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your most welcome kathy :)

[Ruth]

So wonderfully expressed, the cyclic nurture of nature, seasonal exhalation, just beautiful! :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Poppy,
Oh thanks! This one was really fun to put together. Cyclic nurture of nature. That is a lovely phrase and seasonal exhalation- also perfect. Thankyou so much for taking the time to read and comment. I always means so much. Blessings, Kathy

[Ruth]

Most welcome Kathy, my pleasure :)