Autumn Court

Heavy mist presence, extend your scepter:

Horn of power-Autumn!

I see you holding court; calling attention your realm.

Flashing banners wave! Gilded leaf confetti lists through the air.

Blood fire pulled from very earth, strength of our days!

Simply command us.We are your loyal subjects.

Brilliance majestic entrances our eyes. We bow.

Your fire burns within us. Oh we need your brilliance!

Warrior strength-pure, coalesce within us.

To live in courage, fear conquered? Oh opportunity!

Slowly she enters in procession wearing deep multi-colored robes.

Every minute passing, splendor emits beauty's fragrance.

Purest amber, royal purple, orange passion: Oh Majesty!

She has visited us but even now  she is fading.

"Too soon, the time; must you leave us?

Fading, fading......one last dance.

She welcomes the prince of winter into her arms

 together they continue in dance.

Rush of tempest, the royal ones rise,twirling the whirlwind

We gaze after them in joy.

For the life we possess exists within dormancy's rest. 

Short our lives so precious.

Within season's truth.

Author's Note

I did a little more editing.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

well said ..most appreciate the attitude toward not only Autumn but all the seasons .... each with its' own brand of poser and majesty .. i must confess ...fall is the best in my heart ;) enjoyable read and walk through the woodland Courts with you :)
E.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Einstein Noodle,
It means much to this soul that another such as yourself has appreciated this little bit of Autumn whimsy. Fun was this experience. I would notice the colors growing and laid out in splendor and it was like a picture, a tale laid out and I just wrote it out. It was really special to me. I am thankful for people who come and read my earlier stuff. Thank you!
Bless you so much.
Kathy

[Wesley Dingler]

Very nice. I've I've mentioned before I'm a sucker for anything Autumnal.
I really like the fact that you're not restricted by the must for rhyme scheme. Just let it flow naturally, Kathy.
It seems to be working very well that way.


-wes

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Wesley L. Dingler,
Inspiration goes a long way with me. A person must respond when it appears. I suppose this one is response like that. I had the image of a special royal celebration with all the elements drawn from the incredible beauty of fall. Thank you so much for your review and for the great encouragement!!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Paul Bell]

I suppose in a way, autumn is the most important season. The storing season. The year has played out, and all the tools have to be stored away. But for some reason, you also seem to reflect through autumn. You see the actual changes before your eyes. This really can be so powerful.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Hey there, I like your idea. "The storing season cause really, we can find identity with the way we have a place to bring in our thoughts and hopes and ponder their reality. But, yes picking up and cleaning up; put away the years tools and such. Thanks for explaining your take on this season. It was fun!
Blessings,
Kathy

[andrew mitchell]

How the seasons blend but dominate on each passing each giving us their moments of splendour. Nice write Kathy!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Each season comes but to go. I just want to find comfort and be open enough to it's "splendor"every time.Thanks for pointing out this opportunity of finding these moments. It is very affirming. Thank you!!

Blessings, Andrew
Kathy

[richieb]

Kathy,
I enjoyed this poem very much. Vibrant colors splashed across the page. Your writing was a whirlwind of activity. Your images and the action of your words were in balance taking the reader on a majestic tour of this season of change and wonder.
I clearly visioned all that you described. Excellent word choice. This is now one of my favorite poems.
Peace,
Richie b.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

richieb,
You have blessed me so very much with thoughtful review. I guess we all hope that our writing creates something and others 'get it.' To see that you did is all I can hope for and then some! Thank you and thank you again!
Bless you much.
Kathy

[Jon Roggie]

I love your look at the seasons.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Jon Roggie,
There is an abundance of subject matter! It just never ends. Thank you for reading.
Kathy

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful just doesn't say it for this poesy. It's breathtaking and educational for a poet and poetess. The imagery limned is worth remembering years after the read. It felt like I was there and the feeling of being there was so strong! I liked the title too. Everything was just perfect and a pleasure to read, Kathy. Tyfs!

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Cyprian Van Dyke,
I am pleased to receive such an informative message from you regarding "Autumn court" It was inspired by some images I'd remembered when reading the book of Esther. I love to think that someone else may possibly enjoy the theme my mind is wanted to impart and of course the feeling. So Bless your life and writing this coming year....................Kathy

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You have a strong imagination to reach beyond the limits of your mind and on to the words of this screen. Keep up the great work, poetess! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the complete poem. The ending was perfect.
"For the life we possess exists within dormancy's rest.
Short our lives so precious.
Within season's truth."
A dormant life leave us feeling empty. Better to had lived and learn sadness. Thank you Kathy for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Coyote,
How nice to read something and find that it something you can identify or agree with! Yes dormancy is not necessarily a bad thing, sadness,emptiness- drives out of complacency......also part of just being human too I guess. Thank you for reading and commenting. Bless you much! Kathy

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Kathy.

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This was a vivid and beautiful piece to read. Fall is my favorite time of season. The harvest, the thanksgiving, the glorious climax of color. I like all the seasons but fall is simply amazing. Lovely art here my dear poet :)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Lynn,
Fall is your favorite? Yes, it is really so wonderful and full of charms a-many. Thanksgiving is coming up soon and it is a time of just being thankful too. I hope this season finds you well and so blessed. Kathy

[Valentine]

For me...sadly autumn just does not last long enough. Give me the colors and not all that white stuff. Valentine

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Valentine,
You must live more north of me. I am in the pacific northwest and we here do not recieve long harsh winters as some do. It gets cold but not into April-May. Thanks as always for your message and just little note. It so nice to just hear from others. Bless you Kathie.......................Kathy