Cathedral Ceiling

a precious natural room; sky my ceiling, woodland surrounding my fresh place of solitude.

 

       Cathedral Ceiling

 

 Cathedral ceiling, solid cream vault of sky,

 Isolated under your umbrella of beauty

 I feel welcomed.

 As flutes lending their sweet voice,

Woodland song birds echo and call

This place of outdoor freshness 

is really their own.

I am glad!

What prestige! What Joy!

To visit their home unencumbered,

For it is a simple room.

This room of peace invites my being to lift itself,

 to fly, to dream.

Author's Note

If this touches even one person I think that would be really nice. I write because it is satisfying and many times only when it comes naturally. Hope everyone continues to find inspiration and enjoyment in life. Let's all keep finding wonderful things to write about.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Dear Kathy,
You have taken me to this heavenly place, to Nature's beautiful cathedral, where a city boy rarely ventures.
Now, that you've swept me up and stood me here beside you in this soul-inspiring world of peaceful splendor, I feel a deep sense of home in my heart, waking dreams in wondrous joy.

Beeeautiful free versing, Kathy … I love it so.
Thank you M'Lovely Lady-Poet 🍃 ⁓ Richard 🤗


PS: I adore the picture, too … it would keep the ambience alive if it were displayed above your poem, like the cathedral ceiling, itself. 🎶

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Richard,
I appreciate your helpful ideas which run through your theme of newly expressed wonder above. This is something fresh about your writing which I truly find uplifting by the way. Ya know the idea of placing an image directly above a writing is not something I knew could be done as Iv'e not seen a way on the manage your writing' on this site. Your more experienced in this kind of stuff than me I think. I'll try to figure it out in time.
Thanks again for your edifying input. It's so nice to be encouraged in my efforts.
Bless you inside out.
Kathy

[Richard🖌]

though, you did not ask me to, Kathy,
I am messaging you the instructions for placing a picture with your poems. : )

[Alfred Kukitz]

You really know and feel creation surrounding your soul. Very nice!

Regards,
Al

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Alfred Kukitz,
Such tranquility is found just being. Fresh air and quiet are so perfect for just this reason; just to be and feel good...... Blessings to you. Kathy

[KT-B]

I enjoyed your poem wow sounds like a wonderfully peaceful place, you described it well I could imagine it through your words, very refreshing - well done best wishes

[Kathy Van Kurin]

KTBradley
Being able to share a wonderful experience with you is all I could ask for. Your comment is truly appreciated! Kathy