Ribbons

The ribbons wrap my body,
so tight,
The mask I wear
It hides my fate.
I look to sky and wonder,
should I let the ribbons run free?
Should I release the mask that holds my destiny?
Red, blue, gold and white
They flow so freely
like a bird with might.
The mask I wear is tight on my face,
It covers my self and my fate.
Dare to let loose, dare to try,
The feelings of loss is to much to bear.
For now I let the ribbons slowly run free,
But they stay tight on me,
The mask will someday come off,
I will be as I was meant to be

 

Reviews

[Jolie Blossom]

I love how you used ribbons to describe the feelings of masking yourself. Great poem, I really relate. :)

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

Thank you!

[kublakhan27]

I'm shocked at the number of views with only one review to show for it...mind you, I know EXACTLY how that feels x_x A creative and eloquent piece of soul-searching :)

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

Awe, a long time ago this site crashed and all of the poetry along with the reviews were gone.... So while many of us re-posted, we did loose our reviews. Many writers left.
On that note, thank you so much for your review and for understanding my piece it is not so often you come across this.

[kublakhan27]

Oh I see...I just joined last month so I didn't know that :P You're very welcome^^

[zainul]

I hope you will be as you were meant to be.
Lovely work.

Have a nice time and 100/100 rating.

[The Random Writings Of Me..Kates]

Thank you so much for your words and for taking the time to read. much

[zainul]

You are always welcome.
I will read your works bit by bit.