The Limit

There is a limit to what you can do

Can you fly?

Can you see into the future?

There is a limit to your dreams

For dreams are not a reality

They can turn you into oblivion

And shake you to the ground.

The limit is not endless

There is no end

Fall, fall

You’ll never see the end

 

There is no limit

The end is impossible to see

Fly away, live your dream

Go into oblivion

See the prospect.

Believe in the impossible.

Live in the now

 

There is a limit

The dream is impossible

Life is never what it seems

Oblivion is reality

Reality is a nightmare

 

Go to your dream

See your past

Relive your day

Die in your future

Forget what is now.

 

There is no limit

There is a time

A limit to reality

To live

And to die.

Reviews

[Dezaraye]

This poem is so sad, but something that I can relate to. I've felt this way at times and frequently. However, I have learned that I can do whatever I set my mind to. It just takes time and a lot of patience ... Dreams come true ... just not all of them. As my Mama always says, "You can have anything you want in life, but not everything, so pick and choose wisely."

[angry_pandit]

very well done, expressing emotions in form of witty cliche's, i don't know if delivering mindblowing one-liners was your objective, atleast that's how i perceived it. a continuous flow of by-lines maybe, mocking reality and mocking our general outlook on this reality, how clueless we really are.

[Celtic Cat]

gah!!!! Kates, this one hurts to the core. It had hope once....quite like my own dreams. Oblivion...it's where I like to run from reality. Unfortunately, every word here written is true. An excellent piece, dream weaver.

[Orlando Murcia]

Reality is a nightmare. I enjoyed reading this piece, Great job sweetie! orlando