Once Upon a Dream

 

Among the shaded trees she sits alone

Washed away in her own thoughts

Blissfully thinking of the man, she loves

Waiting for him to love her back

The sun shines so bright,

The clouds above the trees wistfully pass by

Her day is about to come she just does not know it yet.

Her prince charming is awaiting her heart

 Her heart beats true to the one she will love.

The river runs so quietly in the background

As she lies in the summer grass

The cool shade washes over her

And she dreams.

She dreams

Her time is coming near

She knows she does not have very long to love

Her prince may be too late for her heart may give out

The vicious act of life may take her soon

Her prince may be too late.

To find her love true

Reviews

[Ladysue]

Kates, I think there is a certain someone for all of us. A well written and reflecting piece. Lately I have been learning that prince charming can be right under our noses. We just have to give them a chance. Love this one too!!

[shinybluestars03]

Lovely poem,
we all sit and wait for that
price charming to come around
hope he finds her soon :)

Thanks for sharing

Best wishes

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Two small items caught my eye. A typo, Prince is typed "price" once, and in the same line we have run-on confusion. I suggest a period after "late" and start a new capitalized sentence. I loved the poem and the presentation, still 100%.