Echos

   

Help Me

 

     I'm Falling

 

Falling       Falling

 

 

 

Falling                         Falling

 

 

 

 

                     Falling

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is one of those writes that seems so simplistic at first look...but then the meaning echoes over and over and over...
there can be so many meanings to the "falling" here...
we can hear echoes of a lover who left....we can hear echoes of a lover who died...we hear echoes of our heart wanting another whom we have met...
on and on and on.
j.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank you J , for stopping by my page and giving so much meaning to my poem. :)

[Laura Storm]

this piece is what my mind has been screaming for so long.

[Miss Evans]

I really liked this. I love when writers use their layout and formatting to help convey the meaning or message of a poem, and you did that very well. I like how the 'falling' falling's are aligned.

Very nice.