Echos

   

Help Me

 

     I'm Falling

 

Falling       Falling

 

 

 

Falling                         Falling

 

 

 

 

                     Falling

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is one of those writes that seems so simplistic at first look...but then the meaning echoes over and over and over...
there can be so many meanings to the "falling" here...
we can hear echoes of a lover who left....we can hear echoes of a lover who died...we hear echoes of our heart wanting another whom we have met...
on and on and on.
j.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank you J , for stopping by my page and giving so much meaning to my poem. :)

[Light and ashes]

Alice in Wonderland is one of my favorites, so of course I love this.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you ! :)

[Light and ashes]

You're welcome! :)

[Neville]

............. ...Fontastic :)

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you Neville glad you enjoyed it! :)

[Neville]

He truly did :)

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Conveys the message perfectly!

[Legolas]

Beautiful poem. It conveys the message wonderfully

[Renée]

Interesting ( :

[Wondering Mind]

though the cradle of my comment may not help...but I hope a thought will catch part of the emotion in this and let it land softly in understanding

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you for your kind reviews! :)

[OnceUponATimeWriter]

Wow is all i can say. I love the way you have formatted the poem and as it is read the reader can see just how you have wanted us to read it. It's simple but it is good.