Spring

 

 

 

 

 

 

From sweet early

morning dew

and a pale sun that shone over silver beams ..



From the bottom of a garden

came the scent of a red rose ..





from a white

mist of clouds

flew songbirds and busy bees ..



from the sands on our beaches

to the lakes near our homes

flowed gentle gurgulling streams ..



from the depth

of the bluest oceans

dolphins leaped in delight...



from planet earth

came joy with spring.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

what i like the most about this is its scope ..i think you have met the sense of universal glory enriching our lives on the planet ... it seems to me it would be easy to make this epic as there is so much to say ..but you have tamed the "too much" monster .. its the simplicity of your lines and fine imagery cast a definite spell .. and who does not love and adore spring time :)
E.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thankyou Einstein for your lovely review of my poem "Spring"

[Coyote Poetry]

I love the days of Spring. The rebirth of life and the earth turning green. Wonderful use of description Katrina. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank you so much for your kind review Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Katrina.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and here we are towards the end of fall with winter thinking about setting in.
and so many wishing it were spring instead.
j.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank you Jacob.

[Neville]

the way it should be and has always been... pure and simple.... :)

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you , yes delightful and simply majestic I hope . Thanks Neville

[Neville]

................. N :)

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

What a lovely thing to read as spring creeps slowly back! I needed a lift, so thank you!

[Tomás Ó C..]

Joy with spring... love the image!!!

[chickenscratcher]

this i believe is so good, you have a way with words..mark