Catastrophic

Catastrophic

A Poem by Katrina Mckeown
"

Just for fun!

"

 Shh Shh

Do not move or make a sound

You see that Mouse..

I'm Getting

Ready ..

To ..

Pounce.

Run away Mouse

Scurry fast as you can..

Ooops you're to late

My paw caught you..

SLAM!

 

 

© 2011 Katrina Mckeown


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Dev
I like the last three lines alot !!
""Ooops your to late
My paw caught you..
SLAM!""
Its short and sweet but a very nice lighthearted read ,, just one thing
it shud be "you're too late" instead of "your to late" ,, u can edit that if u like.
Other than that very well written

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Dev
I like the last three lines alot !!
""Ooops your to late
My paw caught you..
SLAM!""
Its short and sweet but a very nice lighthearted read ,, just one thing
it shud be "you're too late" instead of "your to late" ,, u can edit that if u like.
Other than that very well written

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A rather amusing piece of writing now i think perhaps you have done justice to this style of writing and created a nice little poem which hits the spot.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 16, 2009
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Katrina Mckeown
Katrina Mckeown

West Lothian , United Kingdom



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I try to write inspirational poetry....short poems mainly... though I do write other light hearted stuff too...I have just started writing again recently and I hope most of you will view and honestly .. more..

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