Flowing

Winds blowing , rivers flowing
through spaces to far away places

Down streams, catching beams
trees are swaying
leaves are laying

Frogs are leaping to and fro’
fish are swimming in their shoals
diving in and out from between
the colourful corals below

Tide and times are changing
there’s a lot of re- arranging
dreams are flowing on forever
It’s nice to sit down by the river.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Such a good allegory...this is life as well as nature...and it is nice once in awhile to just sit down
and contemplate it all. Check third stanza..."to and fro"--

Dylan sang in the sixties that "the times they are a changin'"
But I wonder if those ideals we fought for then have now flowed down that river of time.
j.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thanks j for your review and lovely comment.

Katrina

[Chris]

The chill has begun to settle in around here but the view remains - thought-full and memory-laden.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Hi Chris… The chill is certainly in the air here in the mornings and evenings… we still get the odd sunny day scattered here and there ..

[Chris Shaw]

A very nice poem Katrina and as you know I have such an affinity with rivers. I enjoyed the movement and the scenery here. Wonderful imagery. Hope all is good with you.

Chris

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank you Chris… I’m glad you enjoyed the flow …
I am doing well and enjoying any time I have with my grandsons… their vocabulary is expanding and they are a delight to be with. 😀

I hope all is well with you and yours

Katrina

[John the Baptist]

Indeed, life is like a river, ever changing. The Greek philosopher Heraclitus said you can't step into the same river twice.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank you for your lovely review John and yes I agree with that Greek Philosopher … his words are true.
Katrina

[Sami Khalil]

A lovely rhyming poem full of flowing words and cascading images.
Serene in thought and expansive in loveliness.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank you for your lovely review Sami. :)
Have a great day.
Katrina

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly.