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Just Gaze

Just Gaze

A Poem by Katrina Mckeown
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Confinement

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Confined to one place
out of windows I gaze.

Time feels like
a stuck clock
a body block
from the sun
away I am locked.

Until I step out
and come back in
hoping clean air
was breathed in.

Hands washed
for 20 seconds
a dozen times
a day was the
same yesterday.

Times have certainly
changed I wince
at foods I try
not to binge
instead I displace
to a just gaze.

© 2020 Katrina Mckeown


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Yes our world had change. After the bad days end. Most of us are going to be thankful for the simple things. My grandchildren need to go anywhere. Me too. Hello dear Katrina, try to keep busy and be safe.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

4 Years Ago

Thank-you Coyote, yes I am trying to keep busy and safe. Hope you and your loved ones stay safe and .. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

We are okay. Bore to death and you are welcome dear Katrina.



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Hmmmm, the dreaded ' Vid. Got to say I was one of the lucky ones who worked solidly through those dark days, either in the office or out on site building houses

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow! In short sentences you gave an accurate picture of our current situation with this pandemic, its effects on our daily life and pschyche. The invisible enemy is forcing us in many ways but giving us clues to the most valuable things that are immaterial.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

4 Years Ago

Thank you Sami and yes lessons in love and respect for one another and to appreciate what we have an.. read more
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

You are so right. You are welcome.
Our days have become just that. Looking out of the window and reminding ourselves of the freedom we had which is now on hold. Confined to our homes. Fortunately I have a garden which I am ever grateful for. It must be difficult if you don't have a garden to break the monotony. Keep safe Katrina and busy. Busy helps. Stops the mind from going awol.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


Katrina Mckeown

4 Years Ago

Thank-you Chris.. I do have a bit of a garden.. I do indeed enjoy especially any wildlife that visit.. read more
I feel the same way! Being cooped up is no fun and gazing out the window is definitely a pastime. You capture the mood in this poem. Let's all hope we can be unlocked this summer and breathe some scented air. Nice! Fondly Betty

Posted 4 Years Ago


Katrina Mckeown

4 Years Ago

Thank-you Betty and nope being cooped up ain’t much fun at all..
Betty Hermelee

4 Years Ago

You're quite welcome!
it is hard for me to relax I used to say to myself if I only had the time the things I would do LOL now I have the time and I have horrid writers block... so now I'm just reading, a lot! lol:) stay safe Katrina the dawn will come

Posted 4 Years Ago


Katrina Mckeown

4 Years Ago

Aww I hope you come across a story or a poem that ignites your spark/muse or gives your muse a well .. read more
makes us wish we had given those windows a bit better washing...our only eye to the world as we gaze from inside our closed shell, like frightened Box Turtles.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

4 Years Ago

lol thank you j.. you brighten my day :)
Yes our world had change. After the bad days end. Most of us are going to be thankful for the simple things. My grandchildren need to go anywhere. Me too. Hello dear Katrina, try to keep busy and be safe.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

4 Years Ago

Thank-you Coyote, yes I am trying to keep busy and safe. Hope you and your loved ones stay safe and .. read more
Coyote Poetry

4 Years Ago

We are okay. Bore to death and you are welcome dear Katrina.
I’m sure millions of us can relate to your thoughts here Katrina, So so sad that we have to be confined to a gaze! Blessings 🙏🏼


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Katrina Mckeown

4 Years Ago

Thank-you for you kind review Carolynn .
Stay safe and well
Kind regards Katrina

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Added on April 5, 2020
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Katrina Mckeown
Katrina Mckeown

West Lothian , United Kingdom



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I try to write inspirational poetry....short poems mainly... though I do write other light hearted stuff too...I have just started writing again recently and I hope most of you will view and honestly .. more..

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