Absorbed

I fell for you
like raindrops
falling from
the sky
slow and gentle
then heavier
my heart it beats
faster and better
like beautiful
dry flowers
absorb the rain
I became absolutely
absorbed by you.

Reviews

[Rania M]

I love the metaphor of rain catching force and falling heavier and heavier. Just like a fatal attraction. To be absorbed in someone is an amazing feeling.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Rania thank-you so much for your lovely review
much appreciated. :)
Kind regards Katrina

[Rania M]

Welcome! It’s a joy to know and read you dear Katrina ❤️

[Paul Bell]

Nice to see love is still in the air.
As time gets more difficult this love will hopefully blossom.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you Paul for your kind words .
Katrina

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A kind and touching prose, that gathers the feelings to ones chest, well done, good read.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you Thomas for stopping by and your lovely review. Kind regards Katrina .

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this kind of falling in love...i think i remember it...i think...
what a nice diversion, a romantic write amid the turmoil we are all facing.
thank you,
j.

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you j, glad you enjoyed the diversion :)

[Chris Shaw]

Takes me back a while, this one Katrina. Falling in love and using metaphors of nature to describe the depth of intensity.. Nicely conveyed.

Chris

[Katrina Mckeown]

Thank-you Chris I appreciate you popping by
Katrina x

[Chris Shaw]

My pleasure Katrina :)