Do High Schools Even Care About Music Education?A Story by kataylor11My Persuasive Essay I wrote for Comp. 2(the 2nd time) with LOTS of help from JennImagine you are in a high school music room. You look
around and realize just how old everything is. You start thinking, "Does
the school even care about this music room or even music in general? After all,
the entire Athletic department just got new equipment when the old was still in
perfect condition." In real life, this happens more often than you would
think. I have seen this happen myself. Most high school music programs do not
have large enough budgets to make sure their students earn every benefit that
they can from music. The programs instead have to focus on making sure their
students acquire the basics of learning and performing written music, when they
could focus more on the complex and individual aspects. Most American high
school boards focus on what their school has proven works in a high school
education and overlook what can give their students a more extensive education.
American high school boards would benefit from giving their music programs
larger budgets. Some benefits include learning important life skills and
scoring better on exams. If the high school boards could understand how the
benefits of a comprehensive music program outweigh the cost of a larger budget,
then the might slowly begin to expand their music programs. According to a
study by Mark Fermanich, the cost of a comprehensive music education is on
average $143 per high school student for the entire year (par. 5). The study
was ".... focused on a school district, which served over 70,000 students
during the 2009-2010 school year. The district includes urban, suburban and
rural schools with a total district budget of $853 million. From that $13.9
million was allocated to music education representing 1.6% percent of total
district expenditures" (par. 3). If a school district can provide a
comprehensive K-12 music education program with only 1.6% of their
total district expenditures, why are not more school district doing so. How can
they use the amount of funding they are provided as an excuse, when a
comprehensive K-12 music education program can be provided with such
a little percentage? One benefit of having a comprehensive music program is
learning important life skills. Figure 1, shown to the right, includes a quote
Plato once said, “Music is a moral law. It gives soul to the universe, wings to
the mind, flight to the imagination, and charm and gaiety to life and to everything.”
Most of the information Plato was talking about can be learned in a high school
music class. By talking a high school music class, a student is given a place
to let their imagination and mind soar, while still learning other important
life skills. Music students could learn these life skills in other classes and
extracurricular activities, but they probably would not be able to let their
imagination and mind soar. While this is fine by the standards of high school
boards, I do not believe it should be. According to Valerie Strauss, in her article "What Do
Children Learn From The Arts", some of the important life skills learned
from music classes includes creativity, confidence, problem solving,
perseverance, focus, non-verbal communication, receiving constructive feedback,
collaboration, dedication, and accountability. Strauss begins her article by
illustrating how students learn to "think 'outside of the box'" and
if they practice thinking in new or creative ways, they will slowly start
thinking creatively naturally (par. 1). While students can learn how to think
creatively in other classes, they will be given more chances to practice
thinking creatively in a music class. If a student is in a comprehensive music
class, they should be having to creatively think at least once every class
period. This is something that would not happen in another class. Strauss then explains
how music students build confidence by "... practice stepping out of their
comfort zone and allows them to make mistakes and learn from them in
rehearsal" (par. 2). By the time the performance comes around, each
student should be confident enough to perform before a relatively large
audience. While the size of the audience depends on the school, if a student
has practiced enough the size should not matter. At the very least, the music
student should be able to perform their part without freaking out or freezing.
Even if there are hundreds of strangers watching them. Next, Strauss
states that the students who participate in music classes "....
are consistently being challenged to solve problems" without even noticing
they are (par. 3). A music student learns to automatically solve each problem
that arises in rehearsal so that it does not show up again at the performance.
By solving problems every day, students now have the important problem-solving
skills they will need to be successful throughout their entire lives. In the
fourth paragraph of her article, Strauss asserts how music students learn
perseverance by just continuing their music education and not giving up. As
long as a music student continues to come to class and practice, they are
learning perseverance. Something that is especially important to achieving
success in today's competitive world. Strauss later explains how students learn
to focus whenever there is a need of balance between listening and
contributing. This happens by requiring each student to "... not only
think about their role, but how their role contributes to the big picture of
what is being created: (par. 5). If a music student is not focusing on what
they are doing and what is happening around them, then huge problems can erupt.
Strauss asserts how receiving constructive feedback about a performance is a
vital and expected part of any musical education. She explains how students
must "... learn that feedback is part of learning and it is not something
to be offered by or to be taken personally. It is something helpful" (par.
7). If a student does not learn from any feedback, let alone constructive
feedback, then they will never improve. Strauss explains, in the eighth
paragraph of her article, how music classes are collaborative in nature and
give students an understanding that their contributions are important no matter
the size of their role or part. Any music student should be able to
collaborate, even if they are a soloist. Near the end of her article, Strauss
explains how music classes teaches students dedication and how to "...
associate dedication with a feeling of accomplishment" (par. 9). They are
rewarded with applause during the performance because they were dedicated to
learning long pieces of music. Their efforts are made worthwhile, instead of
worthless. In the last paragraph of her article, Strauss describes how students
learn accountability in music classes. She states that "They learn that
when they are not prepared or on-time, that other people suffer"
(par. 10). Music students learn to be responsible, by
admitting when they have made a mistake, learn from their mistakes, and finally
move on. If the students are not willing to admit that they made a mistake,
then they can never learn from it and move on. This will lead to further
problems down the road. According to DoSomething.org, in their "11 Facts About
Music Education", some important life skills that music students can also
learn includes a larger vocabulary, more advance reading skills, and faster
memorization. They state, "Children who study music tend to have larger
vocabularies and more advanced reading skills than their peers who do not
participate in music lessons" (par. 1). By learning music terms, which are
usually in Latin and have to be translated, students are forced to expand their
vocabulary. As students learn to read more complex music scores, their level of
reading advances as well. By having a larger vocabulary and more advanced
reading skills, music students are more prepared for their English, Science,
History, and Math classes. DoSomething.org later states that "... children
who are involved in music lessons show greater brain development and memory
improvement within a year than children who receive no musical training"
(par. 10). Music students learn to memorize music scores or lyrics relatively
fast in order to be ready for lesson and concerts. If they could not learn to
memorize their parts fast enough, they could be embarrassed and even fail the
class. By learning to memorize music scores or lyrics faster, music students
are more prepared to memorize formulas and dates in their other classes. If
high school students could learn so much from music classes, why are they not?
I believe this is mainly due to the student's music programs not having the
funding they need to provide the best learning experiences to their students. Another benefit of having a comprehensive music program is
scoring better on exams. Exam scores are important to the students, their
parents and teachers, and the school board administration. Everyone wants
better exam scores and if a comprehensive music program would help with exam
score, then why do most schools not have one. In their "11 Facts About
Music Education", DoSomething.org states "Regardless of socioeconomic
status or school district, students who participate in high-quality music
programs score 22 percent better on English and 20 percent better on Math
standardized exams" (par. 7). If there is evidence proving students that
who participate in high-quality music programs are scoring better on
standardized exams, then I do not understand why there are so many schools that
do not have high-quality music programs. While I understand that not all
students who take music classes score better on standardized exams, schools
should be providing every resource they can to help their student score better
even if it only helps a fraction of their student population. There is also evidence proving that high-quality music
programs can help their student score well on the SATs. In her article
"Music's Contribution to Academic Success", Juliette Roser explains
how students who took some music classes scored better on the SATs than those who
did not. Data collected
from students taking the SAT, indicated that students taking music and arts
averaged scores that were higher than non music students by 60 points on the
verbal section and 43 points on the math section. Additionally, data revealed
that for every year a student participated in music instruction, their SAT
scores improved. Students with four or more years of music study received an
average score of about 544 as opposed to a score just above 482 for those with
half a at least one semester of music instruction, thus showing a strong
correlation between music and academic success. (par. 8-9) To help illustrate her point better, Roser included two
graphs, Figures 2 and 3, from The College Board, Profile of College-Bound
Seniors National Report for 2001. The graphs illustrate the how students were
scoring better on the SATs in a way that is easier to picture than just reading
about the information in an article. While there has been many surveys and studies that prove a
comprehensive music programs’ benefits far outweigh the cost, American high
school boards still provide their music programs with small budgets. This needs
to stop. The school boards need to learn the facts and not just use what they
know works. If only they knew how relatively inexpensive it was to provide a
comprehensive music program, then maybe they would expand their music program’s
budget. Works
Cited "11 Facts About Music Education." DoSomething.org. DoSomething.org, 2013.Web. 15
Oct. 2013. Figure 1. All
About Plato. All About
Plato, 2013. Web. 5 Nov. 2013. Figure 2. The
College Board, Profile of College-Bound Seniors National Report for 2001. The College Board, 2013. Web. 5
Nov. 2013. Figure 3. The
College Board, Profile of College-Bound Seniors National Report for 2001. The College Board, 2013. Web. 5
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Arts?" Keeping The Blues
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15 Oct. 2013. "Study First to Detail the Costs of Comprehensive
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the National Association of Music Merchants, 2012. Web. 9 Nov. 2013. Resor, Juliette. "Music's Contribution to Academic Success." Encyclopedia of Educational Technology. San Diego State University, 2004. Web. 15 Oct. 2013. © 2013 kataylor11 |
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