Something New

Something New

A Poem by Autumn Rose
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This boy came into my life and turned it upside down.

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 You're the difference, my something new.
 

You could steal my heart, and break it too.

 

You could be the one to teach me how to fly.

& I could be the one for you if I really try.

I'm ahead of myself, my mind moves too fast.

Great things take time, time makes them last.

I'm so confused, or maybe I'm lost.

To be with you is at any cost.

Ruin Me? No you couldn't!

Try to! Do you think you shouldn't?

Do you think you could? Maybe so!

Let's take a chance or we'll never know.

 

© 2009 Autumn Rose


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Autumn Rose
Review this please! I could use the input.

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I like it...and you did a wonderful job of showing what it feels like to be in love.
Great Job :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


At first I was a little put off, I don't generally like my poems to be in paragraphs. Perhaps a little spacing is in order? But after over looking that, I did find a good poem. The words fit together and seem to flow very well. The questions and exclaimations give body to the emotion of this piece, making it seem personal. Which it may or might not be. But anyway, there's definately talent here.

Keep writing :]

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 15, 2009
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Autumn Rose
Autumn Rose

Plainfield, IN



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Autumn by birth, but call me what you like. You can call me conceited, whatever, I call it confidence. You can call me a b***h, whatever, I call it honesty. Honestly, I don't care what you call me,.. more..

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