Soil

Soil

A Poem by kassystiletto-mermalien
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Talking about when accused to go to hell.

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 BEYOND THAT DOOR
His eyes laid upon
a scene so vulnerable 
to the look in his eyes
a smile of confidence began to form across his face 
Pushing the door open, the vulnerable ran,
ran from his look,
into the darkness of his soul 
just at the center
being swallowed into the pit of beyond the soil of home.

© 2014 kassystiletto-mermalien


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kassystiletto-mermalien
I have noticed a lot of what i write is very story-like.

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good work. if you don't mind i'll suggest using repetition in open verse, it will add charm to your work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on December 4, 2014
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Tags: hell, horror

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kassystiletto-mermalien
kassystiletto-mermalien

San Jose, CA



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I am a developing writer and admirer of poetry. Learning every day and attaching what I see onto my writing. Looking for advice on how to improve, because becoming an author/poet is a career option fo.. more..

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