Love all of me...

Love all of me...

A Poem by kjlpoetry

Love all of me
Not just the parts you can see
My fragile heart, still beating in my chest
Treasured by its owner, beneath my breast
Love my mind, despite its disease
When it unravels and I'm on my knees
Love my spine, for it's brittle and weak
When the pain is so bad, and I'm unable to speak
Love me for me, for what I've grown to be
Use your third eye so you can clearly see
My lavender aura, the peace in my glow
My calm disposition, my sweet energy
Don't let me be another memory. ~kjl

© 2016 kjlpoetry


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If we can't love a whole person and condition our love for them depending on how they look and what outside qualities they posses then that love is simply has nothing because love is a free power and it can't be depended on some outside qualities only but the inner aspects of that person too... You said it so well, and the ending line leaves a touching sense in my mind.. We should never let person be only just another memory because of their outside appearance...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Dhiman. The funny thing is, for me, at least, the outside stuff was always most always a.. read more



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A beautiful piece Kassie. The emotiveness of this write is simplistic yet sublime, whilst being a simplistic and sincere message. Wonderful

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I think I may have missed a line though ;)
That is the tragic part. We don't love a person for what they have become, we love them for the image we want to see. These lines:
"Love me for me, for what I've grown to be"
Are realistic and sweet. I enjoyed reading your composition. Good job ☺

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, YumnaKay. I appreciate your feedback. We must love each other for all of our pa.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Years Ago

Yes I agree with you. The pleasure was mine ☺
I think this is a beautifully written craft. Your asking to use the third eye to see you is interesting.. The third eye gives us the wisdom to see the reality. Very calmly you made your point , well done! The last three verses of the white hit me well.
Unfortunately many people go only for the external things staring with looks money, power and other propositions. It is said that we don't love, but we fall in love. But these days, people decide and plan who to love and how to proceed..
Thanks for sharing this..


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Oh thank you. Bala. I love your feedback and it's so true. The third eye is all knowing...if only .. read more
I loved your reference to the Third eye.. Beautiful write, tender expression.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Wondering Mind..I really appreciate the feedback. :) kassie
I enjoyed this poem. Had a honest tone and wish.
"My lavender aura, the peace in my glow
My calm disposition, my sweet energy
Don't let me be another memory"
The above lines stood out to me. Rare times we allow people in to see our real self and aura. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Coyote. I am really happy that you liked it, and being new to this site, I am so .. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome Kassie. You are a talented writer.
kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Oh wow, thank you so much. That pretty much makes my day :)
If we can't love a whole person and condition our love for them depending on how they look and what outside qualities they posses then that love is simply has nothing because love is a free power and it can't be depended on some outside qualities only but the inner aspects of that person too... You said it so well, and the ending line leaves a touching sense in my mind.. We should never let person be only just another memory because of their outside appearance...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Dhiman. The funny thing is, for me, at least, the outside stuff was always most always a.. read more

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Added on October 30, 2016
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Tags: love, depression, chronic pain, future, faith, third eye, believe

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kjlpoetry
kjlpoetry

Atlanta, GA



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