Love all of me...A Poem by kjlpoetryLove all of me
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If we can't love a whole person and condition our love for them depending on how they look and what outside qualities they posses then that love is simply has nothing because love is a free power and it can't be depended on some outside qualities only but the inner aspects of that person too... You said it so well, and the ending line leaves a touching sense in my mind.. We should never let person be only just another memory because of their outside appearance...
Sincerely Dhiman Posted 8 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A beautiful piece Kassie. The emotiveness of this write is simplistic yet sublime, whilst being a simplistic and sincere message. Wonderful
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That is the tragic part. We don't love a person for what they have become, we love them for the image we want to see. These lines:
"Love me for me, for what I've grown to be" Are realistic and sweet. I enjoyed reading your composition. Good job ☺ Posted 8 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I think this is a beautifully written craft. Your asking to use the third eye to see you is interesting.. The third eye gives us the wisdom to see the reality. Very calmly you made your point , well done! The last three verses of the white hit me well.
Unfortunately many people go only for the external things staring with looks money, power and other propositions. It is said that we don't love, but we fall in love. But these days, people decide and plan who to love and how to proceed.. Thanks for sharing this.. Posted 8 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I loved your reference to the Third eye.. Beautiful write, tender expression.
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I enjoyed this poem. Had a honest tone and wish.
"My lavender aura, the peace in my glow My calm disposition, my sweet energy Don't let me be another memory" The above lines stood out to me. Rare times we allow people in to see our real self and aura. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. Coyote Posted 8 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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If we can't love a whole person and condition our love for them depending on how they look and what outside qualities they posses then that love is simply has nothing because love is a free power and it can't be depended on some outside qualities only but the inner aspects of that person too... You said it so well, and the ending line leaves a touching sense in my mind.. We should never let person be only just another memory because of their outside appearance...
Sincerely Dhiman Posted 8 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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6 Reviews
Added on October 30, 2016
Last Updated on October 30, 2016
Tags: love, depression, chronic pain, future, faith, third eye, believe
6 Reviews
Added on October 30, 2016
Last Updated on October 30, 2016
Tags: love, depression, chronic pain, future, faith, third eye, believe
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kjlpoetry
Atlanta, GA
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Just an old soul who is obsessed with the magic and power of words..I write because I'm alive, and I'm alive because I write. Thanks for reading.. more..Writing
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