It feels like I've been lost in a decade's sleep Lying, crying, in a hopeless heap Plagued by darkness, and constant pain Lonely heart, full of disdain Then came you, out of the blue Showing me colors I never knew Sprinkling sunshine on my guarded soul Giving me back light, others had stole Now, life is the way it's supposed to be And I've packed away the melancholy. ~kjl
Seeing good days after coming out of our pain and getting back our light after a bad period is no less than a rebirth.
A well written write. I loved your rhyming both the internal and the end rhyming.
Then came you, out of the blue
Showing the colours I never knew. Beautifully written!
Thanks for sharing.
Keep sharing...
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Bala. You're right about the struggle to come back after a period of pain and st.. read moreThank you so much, Bala. You're right about the struggle to come back after a period of pain and struggle. I'm so glad you liked it and that the emotions came through. :) Kassie
I love your poetry. You allow the reader to peek into thoughts, places and life. We shall be rebirth many times in a long life. We must know change or fall to melancholy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you, Coyote. I'm glad you liked it. I really appreciate you reading and leaving feedback. :.. read moreThank you, Coyote. I'm glad you liked it. I really appreciate you reading and leaving feedback. :) kassie
Thank you so much for the kind words. You're right, it does take courage to allow yourself to be re.. read moreThank you so much for the kind words. You're right, it does take courage to allow yourself to be reborn. Many times I wanted to give up, and now I'm so grateful that I didn't. :) Kassie
Just an old soul who is obsessed with the magic and power of words..I write because I'm alive, and I'm alive because I write. Thanks for reading.. more..