Rebirth

Rebirth

A Poem by kjlpoetry

It feels like I've been lost in a decade's sleep
Lying, crying, in a hopeless heap
Plagued by darkness, and constant pain
Lonely heart, full of disdain
Then came you, out of the blue
Showing me colors I never knew
Sprinkling sunshine on my guarded soul
Giving me back light, others had stole
Now, life is the way it's supposed to be
And I've packed away the melancholy. ~kjl

© 2016 kjlpoetry


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Seeing good days after coming out of our pain and getting back our light after a bad period is no less than a rebirth.
A well written write. I loved your rhyming both the internal and the end rhyming.
Then came you, out of the blue
Showing the colours I never knew. Beautifully written!
Thanks for sharing.
Keep sharing...


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Bala. You're right about the struggle to come back after a period of pain and st.. read more



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Bold I like the form a lot. Nice rhyming, and emotion captured throughout. Cheers Starz

Posted 8 Years Ago


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kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Starzy :)
this is short and lovely. i captures the essence of love beautifully.

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kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the feedback :)
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wow! I like it! the feelings are good and it's catchy

Posted 8 Years Ago


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How warm this light must be to return from the depths, it must be love.

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kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Aw, I love that. What a lovely comment. Thank you, Eric :)
Wow it is a nice poem, short but full of emotions. Thank you for sharing ypur work

Posted 8 Years Ago


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kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Bryan. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for reading :)
Short, sincere and wonderful write. Nothing more. Fantastic

Posted 8 Years Ago


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kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you, AF. I'm glad you liked it. I had the best inspiration :) kassie
I love your poetry. You allow the reader to peek into thoughts, places and life. We shall be rebirth many times in a long life. We must know change or fall to melancholy. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you, Coyote. I'm glad you liked it. I really appreciate you reading and leaving feedback. :.. read more
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I did Kassie and you are welcome.
Lovely, flowing stream of hopeful rhyme.

I believe it takes courage to be 'reborn'. Kudos

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kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the kind words. You're right, it does take courage to allow yourself to be re.. read more
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Gee
Our lives are full of stop start episodes, failed romances, death, broken friendships. Like this, enjoyed the rhyming and easy flow

Posted 8 Years Ago


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kjlpoetry

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Gee, and you're absolutely right. I really appreciate your kind words. :)

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