4.30pm

4.30pm

A Poem by kasiabrooks

It's 4.25pm.
You should be here soon.
"Just another five minutes"
I tell myself,
sat alone on a worn park bench.
Soon it's 4.30pm,
the time you said you'd arrive.
I wait

and              

I wait

and   

I wait.

It's 4.38pm.
I feel a tear free-fall
down my left cheek with nothing to stop it.
What did I do wrong again?
You couldn't spare a minute,
a short call,
to tell me you couldn't make it.
Why did you lie to me?
You're just like everyone else.

And suddenly the tears cascade
like a waterfall
with nothing
to stop them.
The only  
comfort is the
unforeseen
touch of a hand
across my back.

"What's wrong?"

It's 4.39pm.
You're here. 

© 2014 kasiabrooks


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I hate when demons put the angels on wait, angels ain't made to put 'em on wait but keeping 'em all into the heats as a beat.

Anyway, tears don't look good in beautiful eyes so, don't roll 'em down your beautiful face. This poem's a bit personal that came from your own real life and here I can see and feel all your emotions and pain but love as well. Am glad your someone reached, thank God he didn't put you on wait much because I hate seeing angels with teary eyes.

Keep Writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I hate when demons put the angels on wait, angels ain't made to put 'em on wait but keeping 'em all into the heats as a beat.

Anyway, tears don't look good in beautiful eyes so, don't roll 'em down your beautiful face. This poem's a bit personal that came from your own real life and here I can see and feel all your emotions and pain but love as well. Am glad your someone reached, thank God he didn't put you on wait much because I hate seeing angels with teary eyes.

Keep Writing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: relationships, paranoia, lonely

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kasiabrooks
kasiabrooks

Northamptonshire, United Kingdom



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