Saturday Morning

Saturday Morning

A Poem by Kim

© 2008 Kim


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MAC
um, country folks? ~L~ this is a good poem. funny what inspires us. so if not for that person and their rudeness you wouldn't have shared this with us? so now i guess you will have to thank him?? nah.... :) maybe somebody will wake you up with breakfast in bed and lots of coffee next time, wouldn't that make a great poem!!!

seriously, really enjoyed the poem and your style as well, can't wait to read some more

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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haha
I LOVE IT
so true
so funny... =)
GOOD POEM

Posted 16 Years Ago


oh, i hear ya there :)
very nice write... loved the humour
aLejanDro

Posted 17 Years Ago


Oh....Sorry didn't mean to.lol

no really it wasn't me.....a great write made me smile :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

lol..thanks for the smile Kim!!

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

sounds like my neighborhood......6 am hammers banging, saws sawing, trash trucks crashing , kids screaming....My Husband works like James at night and sleeps in the day like a vampire...Hard to give him a place of peace to rest when all that s**t is going on...Great job

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I know this feeling very well, but it sucks even more when you go to bed at 7am... and then that jerk next-door makes up his mind, that morning is the morning to do hours and hours of yard clean-up (a symphony of chainsaws, lawnmowers and leaf blowers galore)LOL.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

lol a very clever and humorous poem.. i know this feeling.. usually it is a lwan mower that awakens me.. but i guess its a must to be the heat, get out there early..
I enjoyed this.. great humor and writing.

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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MAC
um, country folks? ~L~ this is a good poem. funny what inspires us. so if not for that person and their rudeness you wouldn't have shared this with us? so now i guess you will have to thank him?? nah.... :) maybe somebody will wake you up with breakfast in bed and lots of coffee next time, wouldn't that make a great poem!!!

seriously, really enjoyed the poem and your style as well, can't wait to read some more

Posted 17 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 7, 2008
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I like to escape into the world of my mind which then allows the scribblings of reflection to flow. I write what I feel and what comes to mind. Some are silly, some are dark, some are good and som.. more..

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