Why do you insist?

What is there to be expect of if all is done that was asked?

What more is there to do to please one?

Have you not heard of life?

Life or anyone in it isn't perfect.

What more do you want from thee?

To give in and be your slave?

Or to just drop and do it?

I have nothing left to lose so why so harsh?

Would you just drop if I told you to?  

Reviews

[Rahul]

Life or anyone in it isn't perfect.

What more do you want from thee?

To give in and be your slave?

Or to just drop and do it?
nice lines, i liked your thinking, this poem's filled with too many questions and i loved this, you this way made it powerful and i really enjoyed reading much.

[Karrie R.]

I was very unhappy when I wrote this obiously. I wanted to feel back in control so this is how I did.

[Shaun Payton]

lifes busy, you cannot be everything and do everything as asked, it is stressful enough.

[Sami Khalil]

Thought provoking ...Thank you for sharing...:)