First winter day

The first day of winter:
The servant wears her new coat
In a new manner

Reviews

[M.A.Rathore]

Thanks Usman
For learning is a good thing to enjoy... and we can learn in any age. Don't think otherwise...Hope all is fine..

[usman]

thank you sir..correction taken

[M.A.Rathore]

If it is haiku it does not require any title...

[M.A.Rathore]

the -first-day-of-win-ter=6 syllable

Haiku~5-7-5

winter's burning pain-
the begger requested me
yearning my old coat
-M.A.Rathore

* use small letters altogether
This is reviewed not comnented...