an unformed soul

First poem i have written in a while. I hope you enjoy.

walk the path of my mind

but still you don't know who I really am

one second away from crossing the line

but the signs still seem so dim

 

and every step feels like I'm getting closer to insanity

with every step i take feels like it's killing me

but with every step I make feels like I'm becoming free

 

I'am falling into my unformed soul

don't know where it leads

I'am losing control

from the signs it heeds

 

as i fall into my minds gates

whispering, I'am no sign of perfection

I'am what it hates

I'am just it's reflection

 

 

 

 

 

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[Fanciful Goddess]

BEAUTIFUL WORK!